Oh poor pearl.

I can’t wait to read more! It’s so good!

OMG I loved this chapter! always with the cliffhangers though ~

Well bismuth does have a point I just hope she knows Steven isn't rose and won't attack him like last time

I liked the chapter!1

Keep going very good story plz don’t stop thx :))

This is great so far.

I'm kind of curious to how the Diamonds will react. Pink Diamond likely thought they didn't love her, as referenced to her line "Yellow and Blue won't care." but they loved Pink and both genuinely grieved for her death, even if Yellow hid all her grief with rage.

Knowing how bismuth reacted last time she was with Steven, I honestly don't think she would be too much surprised, definitely angry because of the friends she lost but not too shocked and I don't think she'll take it out on Steven because I think bismuth knows now that Steven isn't rose. Another excellent chapter I was impressed on how you changed the lyrics to stronger than you to fit the situation that was cool keep up the good work

orange stripes? why that colour?

you are giving your idea a great story to go with it. I hope you keep true to your idea and the funnys that happen

Hopefully, Bismuth won't take things too hardly

Bismuth is Going to be so pissed.

Pretty good, but the orange striped hair made no sense. It could work if it was pink, but ad of now it doesn't.

I liked the chapter!

Man I’m so hooked it’s not even funny… did I phrase that right? Either way I’m still hooked