Enjoyed it.
keep updating

This story blows Naruho-Dou's out of the water. You are far more imaginitive

Pleasures Across Time

I can't wait until the Warden Zetsu loses his first battle, taking over the world isn't gonna be a fucking cake walk, killing Naruto off is arguably an even bigger challenge than that, I think it would even out the playing field if Naruto in this story unlocked the sage of 6 paths at some point.

any plans for mikoto, kaguya, guren, kurenai, hana, yugao, tsunami, shion, mei, hotaru, koyuki, ni, fu, yugito, matsuri, kushina, naruko, izumi, konan, tsume, inos mom, mebuki, kat, tayuya, kin, mabui, tokka, mito, and yes i do realize most of them are dead or most likely dead, but its fanfiction, well that or you could have the white zetsu go grave robbing or something, im sure orochimaru may have samples for them, lol

Always love a good Kushina lemon. The fact that Hinata is the one training her to be the zetsu's sex slave is a scenario I never thought I needed.

By the looks thing are only getting worse oh well

Well done, very good chapter. Hoe to see the next one soon.

Great chapter

I found this fanfic right after I finished reading the Lewd Prison doujins and I gotta say I love it, especially the parts involving Hinata which is why I hope Hanabi eventually joins so that Warden Zetsu can have himself a nice sisterly threesome. I can only imagine how Naruto is going to react to the news of Zetsu breaking his mother Kushina and making her pregnant and can’t wait for the Mei and Konan chapters.

Great

You bet I'm still enjoying this! The fact that you threw in some more characters that I loved just makes this even better!

On top of that, we're still not sure how this will end? Will it end with the Zetsus winning, or will they be defeated in the end? And what will happen to the women in the end?

I also love how you threw in some actual challenges for the Zetsus, and how you came up with a few theories that's related to the original doujin. Makes sense actually. Only criticism really is that the issue was solved a bit quickly or something.

I hope you'll write a good and bad ending. Happy Writing!

I hate myself for forgetting to ask you but I thought that the Hidden Leaf would have been aware of all of the escaped kunoichi having zetsu spores in their bodies since they escaped from a Zetsu right? Doesn't the Hidden Leaf have a method to cleanse the Zetsu spores in their body or something?

I forgot to ask you in my previous message a few things that I still need cleared up. I thought that the Hidden Leaf would have been more aware of all of the escaped kunoichi having zetsu spores in their bodies since they escaped from a Zetsu right? Doesn't the Hidden Leaf have a method to cleanse the Zetsu spores in their body or something?

Okay, big question, what happened with the other Zetsu? Sho? Did he die or is he just gonna remain in prison and that's it? You made it seem like he was gonna be able to escape and live freely away from the Warden Zetsu with Shizune Ino and the others only to have Sakura kidnap the everyone. Why did you even have Sho escape in the first place with a few women of his own if they were gonna be brought back anyway? I get the feeling that your response may be because the Warden Zetsu needed Sakura to infiltrate the hidden leaf or something which is fine but Sakura should have realized that there was another Zetsu in the village she could have went to for some relief.

Also, is Sakura too far gone by the time she got back to village? I only ask you this because I'm wondering why she would keep her frustrations to herself rather than talking to somebody she trusts in the village.

Also, I find it disappointing that Sho couldn't have Sakura in his harem. Why couldn't you have sho fill the void for Sakura's sexual frustration? He could just as easily satisfy Sakura as the Warden Zetsu if not more since he isn't focused on breeding as much as possible and tried to focus of raising the kids he already had at least. The Warden Zetsu is a greedy piece of shit, he already had a shitload of women in his harem but he really has to have them all apparently, fuck that.

I know this is a dark fanfic but I feel like the Warden Zetsu is winning in all of this too easily, if you don't mind me asking, are things gonna get harder for him or what?