Both the plot and the writing is really good. Very descriptive and totally realistic. I hope that some day you'll write again

cant wait to see an update wonderful story really hits yah

nice! really enjoying this. it's realistic but the happy ending is coming I can feel it. hope Julia and gray pick it up soon

LKVDJ POCWD PJOWKDB£PIGWEN POWEJBPDWOEJN WPDEO JN I LOVE THIS BUT IT HUUURTS IDK IM ON A ROLLERCOASTER OF EMOTIONS BUT I KNOW I LOVE THIS STORY. THIS CHAPTER WAS SO INTENSE!

this story is so messy and painfully real. I love it.

Another mind blowing chapter. You are an amazing author keep up the good work and I look forward to your next chapter

I still love how real this story is. no simple happily ever after. just ugly reality. I absolutely love that u had them together for one last time. when u break up, u can't just turn off years of conditioned responses. and what is going to happen if/when she tells natsu? so anxious for the next one.

Another awesome chapter! Why would anyone be reading this story to hate on the dynamics. This story possess a real life outline, like real shit. I’m not sure if others know what this feeling is like, but I can say for sure that I canrelate. I love that you explore the darkest sides of love. And I have a short story too and lately I haven’t been in the mood to write. We should check the moon cycle, somethings up lol.

Still need more but loooooooved it _ Can't wait to see how the firerman's tournament works out

This is such a great story, I can’t wait to keep reading more! Also congrats on getting into a University!

Gahhhh poor Leo! Breaking a bone as a kid is so scary and I can’t even imagine what it would be like as a parent..You conveyed that all really well.

I totally understand the one more time thing but I have a feeling that it still won’t be fun when she ends up telling Natsu. I wonder, will she be upfront or will it end up slipping out? Hmm.

Great chapter! I can’t wait for the next :-)

LUCY NO

That was a great chapter and it was nice they was able to have a last real moment for closure or the beginning of closure especially for Grey.

I think what you write is very realistic. Often, there is that last goodbye. The amicability between them is so...admirable. Seriously - I'm loving the Graylu dynamic here. Love comes in a lot of different forms and whether they know they can't be together or not, they DO love each other. It's beautiful.

Of course, her timing is sort of bad. She's not technically with Natsu yet, so technically, she didn't cheat. But this was a step to help them both move on. (UGH I'm torn with just wanting them to get back to get, but I LOVE Nalu so much! You have me shipping both couples!

Yay! I’m so glad this is back! I love how you’ve handled each of the characters’ emotional journeys. Can’t wait to read more! Also — Congrats on all the life changes!