Whoa. I have no words. This is... an amazing piece.

Awe such a sweet ending i adored it but i wonder if a sequel could be peiced together

I love the way the world is crumbling and ganon just accepts it all

This is BRILLIANT! Love it!

That got trippy fast. I really like the pacing; it's unsettling, but hard to pinpoint why. You do a great job of letting us feel that something's amiss without confronting us head on with whatever it is. Nicely done!

Really, really nice. I love how much depth you’ve breathed into this setting, and how well Zelda has been characterized so that she nestles right into Termina with everyone else. The prose and descriptions are beautiful. Looking forward to the rest. :)

Nice story

This story is very interesting, especially adding Zelda as a clockworker(which, for some reason is exciting me). I like the juxtaposition between the mess of time and clocks, even though they are related.
I am excited for the story and where it will go. Thank you.