I think you have some misspellings in your writing that could be corrected with another read through. Bc you said that Mayor Newton said “She over consent” I think you meant “she was over the age of consent” or “she offered consent.” Not a big deal bc understanding is still possible, but it disrupts the flow of the read. I’m finding this story really interesting though. What is Bella? Why do they think she’s royal?

Wow! Just amazing! Thank you for another fantastic story!

OH NO NOT the Cullen’s?

Pls don’t let her kill the Cullen’s.

This is fantastic! You never disappoint.

Should be an interesting fight of the Volturi come down

WOW

I read the first and second chapters, they're good. I like this story, Bella I believe is someone special.

This story is just OC enough to make it fun and yet the characters are recognizable. I enjoyed this chapter. I am always looking for newer, lighter stories. Nothing against angst, I just have enough to deal with, my escapes need to really let me escape. :) That said, I kinda hope you have a tiny sideplot where Angela Webber and the other harmed girls get their revenge. Or maybe, you don't have to, but you could edit the line where she was sold to the football team? It just makes it sound like she's going to predator high. I know there are bad guys in high schools but for the whole team to "buy" someone is just skeevy squared. Sighs, I hope you don't take this as me bitching or criticizing, I enjoyed all of the story but that one tiny bit. I liked how in your face Bella is and how relaxed Eddie boy is. I enjoyed Rose's flexibility. I really did like this chapter.

I love this and new confident Bella. I like how Rosalie is t great at cooking and got upset at the snide remarks, makes her more human( not possible but u get what I mean). Can’t wait for more

Wow I'm amazed you certainly know how to catch people's attention. I love badass Bella and newly hot and showing it Edward. I'm most definitely looking forward to reading more.