I've just finished your story and this is great ! I really like your writting and I'm going to read the others story you wrote :)
Thank you for this, I can't wait for the rest

Are you gonna keep going with this one since meyer is coming out with the complete midnight sun book?

I loveee your writing & this book gave me so much joy so thank you :) !

I am thoroughly enjoying your reimagining! A small but important point:

"I had barely turned off the engine when he suddenly scrambled out of the car, almost catching his jacket in the door in his rush."

How does he catch a jacket in the door that he doesn't have?

Well Edy is a nice nickname for her. Not a bid idea having a new vampire confide in an old vampire, in terms of age. I knew you wouldn’t change her eating bears, elks, wolves, etc to her eating fish, but it would be slightly amusing to have a vampire eat fish. She would redefine spear fishing for sure. I doubt she would get much blood from fish though.
I like the struggle you have going on within her. To kill or not to kill. That is the (vampire) question.

We’ll take a look at this. Looks like it could be good. Certainly interesting reading from the POV of a vampire.

I'm coming very late to the feast. It might have been fun to follow along as you posted chapters. Still, not having to wait is probable better! You have a great knack for drawing out every conceivable inference from the briefest comment in the original story. I concur - you have a great gift for writing. You understand the characters; It is easy to like them as you introduce them and tell us about them; It is easier still to cheer them on.

This is the best fanfiction I've ever read, you're really talented.
Your Edythe is my favorite character, I think she's amazing, so much detail and depth to her, and although once or twice she didn't felt real to me, like I knew someone was writing what she was thinking, she's still the best.
You did a very good job here, thank you.

Can I make a request? meeting the cullens is one of my favourite chapters. i would be interested in your take. I love your writing either way.

Carine wouldnt have blue eyes...

it's a very stupid ending
why ?
you did so well before , with this entertaining story, so touching
why an alternative ending to your story ?
you certainly explained it somechere but …
a bit disappointed
anyway, thanks for all the other chapters

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Wow. Just... Wow. Amazing work!

bonito final, aunque si te soy sincero fue un poco corto, aun así fue increíble, gracias por tu arduo trabajo

Hey! So she read the letter, I was always curious about that, I don't remember Beau or anyone mentioning it in the end of Life and Death so it was kinda frustrating to me since that was an emotional letter, thanks for fixing that.
I'm really excited for Breaking Dawn!