Loved this story. You write very well.

What a ride! Wow. Looking forward to reading the sequel.

Enjoying story - - hoping there will be more chapters to come

I know this is long removed and you might not even see these reviews any more but I love this fic! Thank you so much for lending your talent and writing it! I hope this message finds you well and happy.

I too beautiful to rest the without a right happy ending
Please continue this fiction

Underpants? I dont think Americans call female underwear underpants lol. Enjoying reading this story

Wow Maura has a husband that isnt Fairfield, Falconer or any of the other men associated with the show. Thats interesting although she should be with Jane but at least its coming.

LOL sandwiches.
I am so glad that Maura and Jane figured it out; that they belong together. Thank you for writing this excellent story.

*deep breath* This is heartbreaking. Not knowing the reasons for Jane's reactions, does not change the fact that this is very heartfelt. Charlie said to Maura what his Mom could not.

Oh really! Maybe Maura should just follow Jane, help her with Charlie and then show Jane how she feels. Starting with a kiss.

LOL! This is so embarrassing for Jane. I would also not want to have this conversation. Trust Maura to think there is nothing wrong to talk about this.

Yes, Maura cannot hide from Alejandro forever. They have a daughter together. A daughter that is starting to ask questions about her Dad.

Maura is having a break down, but subconsciously she knew where to go for comfort. Jane provided her with that.

Yes, I am glad that Maura has thrown Alejandro out. My first reason is not for the fact that she can now make place for Jane and Charlie in her heart and home. My reason is for the moral upbringing of Maura's daughter. She cannot trust Alejandro not to expose himself, or Ramone, in front of their daughter, seeing that they cannot keep their hands off each other. Not even long enough to make sure that they are alone.

Now I am confused again. Why would Maura want Alejandro to send Ramone home?
I would also be upset with Jane not telling me she is gay, after everything that Maura told her about herself.