Reviews for A Deep Breath
Kedrane chapter 24 . 5/25
Such a awesome story ! Great job !
Jane chapter 18 . 1/15
I'm really loving the story but aren't they all getting high too often? How can they be covering their patrols if they are always high? How can they GET high with their wolf metabolisms? Charlie mustn't have much of a sense of smell. (I'm older than the usual readers, remembering my own daughter trying to hide the evidence and spraying like mad. We always knew.)
XxTinkerBella21xX chapter 6 . 1/13
I love love my sea bag! Mine was issued in the Navy but still it's way better than a clunky suitcase!
RosalieHale237 chapter 24 . 10/21/2019
Love this story cant wait to read more
FrogEnchantress chapter 24 . 10/8/2019
This was a great story! Tons of weed but it fit!
evfangirl98 chapter 24 . 9/17/2019
Loved it
momma2fan chapter 24 . 8/26/2019
Great job! Glad Edward and Alice got their just desserts. Loved it.
bkjar chapter 23 . 8/2/2019
Perfect solution!
Loveforwolves143 chapter 24 . 6/12/2019
Very good story. I love bellas chatacter. Great job!
rachel625 chapter 24 . 5/15/2019
This story was great! Thank you so much for sharing!
ObsidianDraconis chapter 24 . 4/26/2019
This was a great fic. I enjoyed it very much. I can’t wait to read your other fics. I’m on a Paul/Bella kick right now so it’ll be a while. Thanks for sharing your talent, you’re an awesome writer!
ObsidianDraconis chapter 23 . 4/26/2019
I still think Jake, Quil, and Embry should have gotten into more trouble and been told off a bit but I’m glad she told Leah exactly how she feels.
ObsidianDraconis chapter 21 . 4/26/2019
Hmmm perhaps Eddie learned a new way to use his gift that would allow him past her shield? Or maybe Alice did? I figured they’d return. He’d spent too much time around her, too much time becoming addicted to her blood. There was no way he’d be able to just let it go. I feel for Esme and Carlisle, but they were both too much of a threat to allow to live.
ObsidianDraconis chapter 20 . 4/26/2019
Oh thank god. Good thing she listened to Sam, though I wonder why he was so cold with her. I hope Paul kicks those three idiots asses. They caused all that pain without knowing what they were talking about and it all could have turned out so much worse considering what happened before Sam got to Bella. If the tide had gotten any higher, she could have drowned. They need to learn that you can’t just say shit without knowing all the facts. And I also hope she lets Leah have it. She deserves to let her feelings on the matter be known.
ObsidianDraconis chapter 19 . 4/26/2019
My heart is hurting at all this right now. Please, please let the guys be wrong. Please.
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