wonderful story, spent countless nights reading to finally get to ch 24. i love the production quality, and the thought you put into every chapter. please update soon, cant wait to finish this epic story.

Right now im telling myself that your having writers block, as archive of are own says you were active a year ago, and that you have 26 chapters(but only 21 on AoOO).
So please dont abandon this, in my opinion it very well made

If you are working on them, keep up the good work
If not, please reconsider and return to this

I hope you come back to finish this interesting story but since it's been a while I can hope that one day this story gets the ending it deserves.

shinji cursing is stupid

Why did you stop, negative reviews or lack of following, I've been reading since chapter 11 released and then you just stopped, why?

I found this fic to be incredibly solid and enthralling. I sorely look forward to the conclusion.

Looking at the update and publish dates, it's kinda hard for me to believe you'd been putting out something of this length in such a short amount of time. It is impressive.

Huh, curious deviation. I'm intrigued! :)

Nice job!

This is a really good start to the story!

I can't believe that such magnificent story has a low amount of reviews. I've enjoyed everything so far and i hope you update soon.

D4rK

New chapter...WooHoo! Still just recovering from Mari...it hurts. I decided to reread the whole story and it just hurts now knowing the future. Makoto never say those words lol, they may have more significance to your immediate future. Nooooo not Pen-Pen leaving too! All these goodbyes are getting to me! No WAY, HE'S GONNA BE A FATHER AGAIN?! Really not sure how Shinji is gonna take this, its either gonna be just shock or really bad resentment more than he already has for Gendo at the moment. Even though I know he's not gonna rebel so to speak, be still doesn't exactly want to do anything anymore because of Mari's passing. Trying to manipulate him isn't exactly an easy thing to do, being an Angelic being must give him some perception as to whether or not the dead can truly be United with the living. Okay, that merging was kinda disturbing to visualize instead of just eating the small hand sized thing Gendo had on him in EoE. Fuuuuck he's gonna have more powers. Wow, how developed is Rei's own angelic nature? She was never able to do this before, unless coming out from Unit 00 awoke more of herself thanks to Lilith. Wow, Gendo is completely disregarding his previous scenario then? REI vs Kaworu had me on edge, didn't expect him to allow himself to die though. I know he did so in the series but I thought he might fought to the end just to say that he had. Well, now that he's gone its time for rhe pilots ro prepare for the Mass Production Eva series, this should be interesting since there's more than one this time...unless Shinji refuses to pilot until someone he cares about gets hurt. Wasn't expecting steamy shower time, but still enjoyed it. I wonder who these spies are, mainly if their any of the main cast and not just maintenance or such. The time is coming, and i know you've said it's not gonna be a mindfucked like EoE but it ain't gonna be a happy one either so I'm very anxious! Great chapter!

Bruh

running around REIPING

Alright new chapter! The warning...has no effect on me. Bring it on! Hm, wonder what Gendo will be doing from now on since he isn't the same as he was before. He knows they'll come to attack, he has the Eva's but not ample enough to combat the mass production ones. Shinji really is messed up from rape angel, hopefully Rei can pull him through. It's oddly fitting, in the beginning it was Shinji making her human, and now she has to return his humanity. Seductive Rei is best Rei, cause I still remember the nightmare fuel of her naked and alluring from End of Evangelion. Guess this is the start of the lemon and lime, better great the lotion and lock the door. Bet her pussy is angelic lol. Awesome lemon. Well now that's an interesting question, does the half angel believe in God? And another great steamy scene with Mari. After Rei she is my absolute favorite. Oohh Misato being the sneaky spy now huh? Hm, Ritsuko is going under quite a bit of change on her part as well. Hm, that's an interesting second part of the dummy system. I wonder if they were used this way in the future if it'll trip up anyone combatting them. And even more backstory on Mari, wasn't expecting that to be her reason for being orphaned. That damn LoTR reference lol, ah I love that this story has so many references. Love finding them, because many are from things I love. Oh no, instead of Rei it's gonna try and infect Mari instead? Oh Kaworu is gonna be angry! Hm, I've actually felt bad for certain Angels here, including Gaghiel because it simply wanted to be with others. Same with Leliel but it was more volatile with it's methods. Armisael is actually not evil intentioned like Bardiel or even Zeruel. But still, there is a difference between what is right and what is wrong, no matter the perspective. I wonder if since the Angels that appear from the biofusion, and if they were to separate would they grow conscience of their own? or a collective mindset? Because the Bardiel that tried to crawl away seemed angry, so do they develop their own personalities or have some sense of it perhaps from Armisael's memories of said Angels? NO NO NO! DO NOT TELL ME SHE DIES LIKE THIS?! Man this chapter is messing me up right now! Great chapter!

This is probably the only time I feel for Kaworu... Poor guy...