To Shadow Reaver

Marvel always had bad animation to DC. That's a matter of opinion since i'd bring up Marvel 90's tv show, Avengers Assemble (until season 5) had superb animation despite how the overall show was.

- You realize you literally just proved Disney point here. Because having a character that's hot is more important than a good characfer is why "sjw's" continue to thrive cause of dumb comments like this

- How is lonewolf a hack ? Did he do something for you to be an asshole towards him?

(To ReaperOfBalance)

Woah! Guess somebody didn't watch the episode aye? Let me break it down kid, after the fight with the robots Hill and Fury escort the Reaper and Strucker to the prison but they make a big break, Fury tries to stop them but only gets so far and his hair begins to turn white because of what Strucker did to him using his robot arm. Now if that's it for dumb questions from guys who didn't watch the show then I suggest you get to it and stop asking silly things instead of actual criticism. Now to Dragonlord0.

Man what a trip down memory lane! Remember this episode form when I began watching the show, the one where Iron Man fights the HYDRA robots, all those shorts before the show started for real introducing each character were my shit! I hope you don't just remake each episode though, it's what that hack Lonewolf did in his Naruto fic and it sucked.

Yo, so I was just checking out what Elysium is in the greek lore and it's supposed to be the afterlife, a heaven while the Underworld is Hell. That in mind, does it mean Sean was dead and all the other guys were dead too but now he's alive? That's a pretty cool concept I think but I don't think you really knew about what Elysium was beforehand because from your description it's the greek Asgard when it is actually the greek Valhalla. I read this stuff a lot and I also know Percy Jackson so I know my shit.

Oh yeah, sorry if the previous one sounded like I was bashing Sean, I don't think he's a big coward but I'm just saying that by greek honor (which you like a lot) he would be considered a coward. The description says he's going to make up for that so I wish for you to do something with it and have him grow and become a better person since he's alot like KRatos right now and Kratos is well you know, a huge asshole. He sold his soul instead of facing death like a man, killed his wife and daughter, sacrificed his men (more than once really, read the comics) and got a shitload of people killed by killing gods in 3. You may think he's good because of the last game but even the game and himself take note that he was an asshole, it's why he thought twice before killing Baldur and then did it anyway so he wouldn't be another angry motherfucker like him. Just saying, Sean ain't that bad yet but you should watch out to not make him bash everyone because thats shite.

I'm glad there's one for the harem already but I don't see how they work together, I can totally see him falling for her because she's hot and cute (Pretty sure Kratos would fuck any girl that moves) but what she sees in him is what I don't get, considering he hasn't shown any kindness or humanity so far. Janet might like bad boys (?) but it's kinda lame that she just plays the stereotype chick who only digs strong masculine bad boys. Figured you don't have those traits irl (no offense) so how would you feel if a girl rejected you on that basis? Happened to me a few times.

The rivalry with Hank I don't get, sure, Hank is a pacifist but if Sean is that obsessed with violence that he can't hold back (we come a long way from Sparta, ya know?) then that makes him the one in the wrong. Would be fun if Sean learned the wrongs of his way because in the present day guys with his mindset are part of why bad shit happens in politics or the streets (police brutality sucks, bro). I'm a bit of a liberal myself.

I noticed that you haven't described Sean at all. Just that he's got Kratos' scars and mark but I hope that's it because if you're going to jack all his stuff then you should abort the OC part and make him Kratos after GOW3. I think the problem with Sean is that he's in all your work and he's the same but he's also too different, you have him get rid of nukes in a story (which is anti-war) but here he acts very pro-war. In some you say he looks like a beefy young dude from a soap opera for teens with the Punisher's costume but then in the others he is like Kratos? I think normal and greek Sean should be separate characters with different names.

You know, Sean said he's taken but you said this was a harem so did you change your mind or is he playing hard to get? I think harem works best when all sides push for it and not just the dude, though I don't like when harems mean the dude can have a bunch of girls but the girls only get one man. Maybe that's what harem means but I think it's shitty and a bit (forgive the word) sexist. Scratch that, very sexist. I can understand the Hank and Janet split (kinda)but I hope if you go for any other taken girls Sean respects them enough to let them have other males.

Should have talked about Sean's powers and abilities a bit more too. I know Chapter 1 is very old and not one of your bests and yes I know you probably expect us to assume Sean's powers and weapons are the same as Kratos... but that's bad bro, sorry. He should be more original, I'm not saying you can't lift stuff but maybe instead of just ripping Kratos you can rip just a bit from him, a bit from Percy JAckson, a bit from Marvel's own Heracles. Man, Marvel does have its own greek pantheon in the comics, dunno if they showed in the show 'cause it's been long' man but you should work with that too,. There's when Hulk fought Zeus and got his shit handed to him, ouch. And why won't Sean talk like a greek too? He uses a lot of phrases and shorts and abbreviations a greek won't use, (from the movies I've seen). At least Thor actually talked funny when he first came and only learned basic english as time went on for his dates with Jane.

Don't mind but why is Tony so out of character? I think his animated version in this show was a lot less childish and troublesome than the later ones. I don't think he was wrong in here, SHIELD did steal his tech and while they could use it against HYDRA you need to learn from the first Iron Man, Tony's arms dealing days are over. Of course he had the right to be mad at Fury for doing shit like that behind his back, imagine the government using those. When Shield gets infiltrated what's to stop those being stolen and used against civilians for evil? Pretty sad that Sean was as blind and insensitive as to side with SHIELD. Does it mean he'll be siding with Maria and the others when they go after the Avengers? I wouldn't want that storyline at all since they made Maria bit douchey then.

The worst case scenario reminds me of Hiroshima and Nagasaki. First bomb was one thing but the second was overkill. I heard Godzilla was made as way for the japanese to embody the fear and pain and destruction they felt, wonder how you feel about it since you're a big Gojira dude.

My counterargument to Sean's talk about weapons is that some weapons just shouldn't be made without a reason period. I don't want a ban on all guns but I think they should stick to selling six-shooters in stores instead of semiautomatic monstrosities that can kill half a classroom before even changing the clip. I can understand why Sean says what he does but he is much too dumb or has too much to learn if he thinks Tony not wanting more mass destruction weapons equals letting a world get destroyed by dissolving the military. Whoever the idiot was, Tony isn't like it 'cause he at least keeps making the Mark suits and upgrades for the Avengers it's just that yeah, he doesn't trust Fury, and should he really? He might be a good man but as soon as an asshole replaces him and gets his hand on all that tech blood flows. Shit man, don't you remember when Iron Man 2 made a big deal out of Tony not sharing his weapons with the government because it's the fucking government? Do you want Trump to get mass destruction weapons? Because that's how you give Trump mass destruction weapons. Sorry for the rant, just opinions.

I remember the break scene just fine, nice change from canon that they both were stopped but I don't know what that means for future chapters since Strucker was prominent in the early episodes.

I always like about this Nick Fury that he's less like Sam Jackson's MCU version at first and more like the comic book Fury but then he gradually adopts the look of the movie version.

Harem time:

intriguing

Reviews longer because I thought you’d like it.

Wow! Lol, I remember this show from childhood, I was watching before the Avengers movies. Man, what great memories, I liked it better than most MCU films, it was more comic book styled. Too bad it got canned for Avengers Assemble, never cared for that. Marvel has always shitty in animation compared to DC but shows like this they had soul.

Kinda weird how Janet left Hank, that means Hope won’t be born then. Sure hope you actually change the plot after based on the alterations like that. Tbh Janet is a bit bitch in this, Hank in the show was a very nice guy. I’m no pacifist but I’ve friends who are so I don’t think it’s nice of a girl to ditch a dude based on that, plus him being non violent is good ‘cause don’t you remember that a few versions of him actually abused Janet? He beat the crap out of her in Ultimate comics but those are awful, everyone sucked there. Come to think of it, Janet resembles that kind of toxic chick who avoids healthy and stable dudes in favor of total jerks or violent bad boys like Kruger. Met a whole lot of those in school, had bruises and shit, carrying babies and shit. Funny as hell. Is sad too when all chicks care about is sex and they don’t let you follow your dreams and interests like Janet here. Can’t a man love science AND his wife? Sounds like a bitch to me.

Oí, so Sean arrives early this time huh? Figured you hate waiting. I like Spartans and Greek mythology being added is nice (it does exist in Marvel, it’s just the films hardly adcknowledge it) but I just wish your chapter would have more content (I know it’s old but still) since it’s basically just Sean waking up, killing an innocent doctor that helped with no care and no apologies (poor guy) and then going on to do that shit he do when he has to explain shit to audiences that you could just show.

I wouldn’t happen be the only one who thinks the full name of Sean is stupid sounding for a Greek guy, right? Even your other fics I seen I have no explanation for why he’s called that when he is from the past and a place where names were of one word, Leonidas wasn’t called Leonidas Gerard Butler ir some shit like that ya know. So does that mean Sean’s from the future but got sent to Greece? Or is it just because you really like the name and need to give him it all the time? That would be real dumb.

Ahh, whatever. Anyway, you plan to explain who did what to Elysyim? Was it the Titans? Either way, I can see why Sean acts so grim but I think he’s a coward. Doesn’t matter if he outmatched there, the real Greeks wouldn’t’ of run in the face of death and Sean was clearly powerful enough to do something so if he ran alone without saving anyone with him it means he’s a coward and without his honor by Greek traditions. Don’t agree 100% but it’s true, the man should have died defending. Would be cool if you gave him characters arcs, like he needs to overcome his own cowardice and redeem himself for his offense.

I notice you shit on pacifism a lot through your fic, is it because you’re pro war in real life? I read somewhere that Call of Duty is propaganda to profit from the shits of war and only there to convince kids that the army is always right, would make sense since you talk lots about Call of Duty in other fics. Me I don’t think pacifism is bad, it’s just too many people love war and make it look good and flashy in movies when it should be hellish so of course it would be great if we had peace. I think it’s silly how in Rider you had all nukes be disarmed but then you have the guys using weapons like the Predator’s bombs, Kaiju (Even good Kaiju kill civilians by accident) and shit like that.

Talk about harems:

I like your example but I dislike repetition. I sometimes see you repeat chicks from one harem fic to other and it’s a bore. For this one I pray you just do characters from the show. Sif needs to be in, makes sense ‘cause you know that Thor is always cycling her for Jane Foster. Enchantress too but you need to be smart about it because she’s evil and I hate evil bitches acting all nice good out of nowhere for a boy’s harem. Maybe she gets all wet for him and tries to seduce him through mind tricks but he gets to bed her Kratos style before turning her in anyway. Ms. Marvel (man she was so much better than when she’s Captain Marvel) needs to be in too but careful, because Disney wants you to respect whamen and she’s a strong independent wahmen (lol), Brie Larson wasn’t even hot in the films.

Who else, oh yeah, some X-women would be great. I’m thinking Storm (if she won’t get together with T’Challa in this) but no Little girls please, that’d be real creepy since you made Sean out to be Kratos. Wish you hadn’t though, Kratos was an asshole pre-2018, all he does is kill and get innocent people killed over dumb shit and he was shitty enough to get his own people killed for revenge.

nice chapter, keep up the good work

Tony always gets on SOMEONE'S nerves.

Nice “Fury” reference

Why/How were nick and Maria at the Vault when they were just on the carrier before Sean and Wasp left? You made no mention of them going with Sean and Wasp

Awesome

They said that a mask and gloves were enough to go to the supermarket. They lied, everyone else has clothes on.

Nice Ch, can't wait for the next!

See ya

Oh my god he kick Iron Man ass and please continues this story please!?

Awesome!

I'm still reading Rider of the League(chapter 14) but I quickly clicked on the link to this story when I got an email about it.

Is there any chance of the Greek gods being involved? If so I would suggest having some 'Percy Jackson and the Olympians' chapters that could work to solve on how to bring them in.

Again, I really am a huge fan of your work and a huge fan of Sean Ashburn Kruger.

Don't forget my personal favorite A true bringer of Justice

Yeah baby!