Reviews for Harry Potter and the Unexpected Dogfather
Veronica McClure chapter 16 . 7/26
Boy! Truly sounds as if Draco really is quintessential "Dumb Blonde" ! He hasn't learned a thing! He thinks he can plot revenge against a seventh year Slytherin! Guess he is cruising to be a nameless heir of a dead house!
Veronica McClure chapter 14 . 7/25
That's why one should be able to do something like that in pencil first, then go over it in ink. But nooo, the the Wizarding World doesn't like no maj things.
Veronica McClure chapter 13 . 7/25
It was even obvious to the kids!
Veronica McClure chapter 13 . 7/25
Sirius could work with the Goblins of Gringotts to make it so anyone who uses the name of Black as identity who doesn't have the right to, will be transported from wherever they are straight into a specially prepared vault in Gringotts.
bode chapter 11 . 7/21
i'm almost certain its a girl that wrote this fic. hate to break it to you but boys have erections a looot and at very odd times for seemingly no reason. taking a piss, morning wood, seeing something erotic etc. its honestly just impossible and very unrealistic for a guy to have his first erection at the age of 13. i remember having them in 4th grade. also its really not something that would make sitting uncomfortable for any guy at all. i don't mean this to be a flame or anything, i absolutely love your story. just felt i had to put that out there
Sujeeth chapter 17 . 7/15
Your fic, vocabulary and characterization were all marvellous but the multiple povs man... just too many povs. I hoped for at least 50% of Harry povs but i think there was barely 30% of it. i decided to skip all povs and read just the Harry parts and the chapters took only 5mins to finish. Dont consider this as a flame but honestly, i just couldnt stand the povs.
Mischief101 chapter 17 . 7/14
I'm really enjoying this sequel. I'm obsessing over who the mystery stalker is. I don't know the names of any of the older years so I can't even guess. Is his other victim pansy? I know it's possible it's a girl from a different year but it seems more likely to be one of Daphne's roommates cause they could enter her dorm without suspicion.
I hope they catch Pettigrew. Although if Riddle is going to be involved in the next part, if there is a next part, then he needs one of his slaves to help him. Pettigrew is the most likely for that job.
Great story and I hope you continue it even after this year is over.
trispectrum chapter 17 . 7/13
Great to see a new chapter. I am really enjoying this story. There are portents to some future drama especially relating to the stalker on the train. Looking forward to seeing where you continue to take it. Also looking forward to the next update. Very well done.
Araytigre chapter 17 . 7/13
Excellent! It is never good to be too predictable, and little does Daphne know, but by her suddenly deciding to be Unpredictable, just saved her And Tracey's lives (or at least life as they know it). It will be interesting to see the Dawager Longbottom's reaction to Neville's new information about Harry. The Scion Selwin will soon learn that She is aiming for someone that is not only out of her league, but is already taken too! Ron is learning, lol. Thank You. TTFN
Specky Clarke chapter 17 . 7/3
Wonderful story, well thought out and good to read.
Veronica McClure chapter 17 . 6/30
Why is it this rich, young witch should be so determined to get a wealthy wizard irregardless of his preferences, that she hasn't even considered taking a year to travel after Hogwarts and see the wider magical world outside Britain.
Veronica McClure chapter 17 . 6/30
Interesting. Those ten years will be spent with Vernon being victimized by the other inmates. Those inmates will have a high old time carrying out "Jailhouse Justice" on Vernon Dursley. hehheheh! Also with his loudmouth, he's very likely to set someone off every hour on the hour! Yep *Poor old Vernon Dursley is not going to weather those ten years as well as Harry did.
Hank1967 chapter 17 . 6/30
Excellent chapter! Loved the detail and the length. Wondering who the psychotic stalker is... Nott maybe? Or maybe Flint? Glad to see that Harry and Daphne are together. Also glad to see that Ron is starting to become more human as opposed to a garbage disposal. Enjoyed the ribbings that both
Sirius and Ron got! Very well done. Also glad to see that the stalker's plans were once again thwarted. Can't wait to see what's next!
mrfresh chapter 17 . 6/30
Great update. Thanks for keeping after the story! I enjoyed the continued development of Harry/Daphne and the peek into the Grangers at the end. I was a little confused by the evolution in the Neville/Tracey dynamic, but given your writing style, I’m confident it will be explained thoroughly in the future. I’m also on edge about the creepy stalker.
Firedawg chapter 17 . 6/30
A very enjoyable story and thank you for sharing.
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