Reviews for Invictus
RandomCoolGuy chapter 1 . 6/11
I really expected him to be more smooth with girls because he has sisters in this fic. I mean he has daily interaction with girls. Also Bakugo still bullied him even though you stated that his sisters are overprotective?
CrazlyWacky chapter 1 . 4/21
All might's quirk does not boost or affect the cardiovascular system. His quirk has many boosts: enhancing muscle mass, increasing the user's stamina and giving him an immense amount of boost when using punches, kicks, etc... So to summarize what his quirk does is significantly enhance all his physical abilities to a superhuman level
bajy chapter 5 . 2/26
I love this story...
King Eli chapter 5 . 2/26
Hey, some of the best badasses of fiction dual wield, like Legolas and Drizzt. Written by Content Creating Giants. I get that dual-wielding sword gets more praise then it ever deserves (the same with the katana itself lmao) but it can be done right.
CRose chapter 4 . 12/11/2019
Great story while it lasted! Tons of fun to read and I like the little extras you added to the story to give it more depth.
bajy chapter 4 . 9/1/2019
Awesome job with the story so far, it is really great, is Izuku going to be shipped with Momo or Uraraka?
I'm only into just Boy x girl (just that, harem is something I am not into) shipping's
Just to let you know
Will there be more chapters soon?
Reverseflash chapter 4 . 11/28/2018
So I’m assuming this is discountinued or on hiatus either way this title is really interesting and could’ve meant something if you continued the story Invictus meaning invincible I’m Latina cool
Reverseflash chapter 4 . 11/28/2018
I don’t mind some changes to the story although some scenes we need to back trace and take a look at because they don’t really make sense but the manifestation of one for all is really what I’m here for that doesn’t make sense first off we see all might as a skinny dude very similar to Deku st first then later on (manga wise) we see him during his masters battle with all for one clearly much more beefed up and then we see him looking s but younger or the same as in the movie when he’s fighting those crooks at the beginning anyways my point is that The manifestation part is dumb Only reason all might is skinny is because of his lung and stomach being lost and damaged so anyways a couple kinks to work out but still a good story
Cieszesi Niezmiernie chapter 4 . 10/1/2018
PLease let this series be continued
Guest chapter 3 . 9/9/2018
You do realize in canon izuku was able to use full cowl at 10% after only having one for all for less then a year right? An izuku whose had his his quirk for almost 2 years well he should be at about 25%-30% when using full cowl
the addict returns chapter 2 . 8/6/2018
im having issues believing that allmights a bad teacher or that one for all is so randomly generated between users that its basically like forcing evolution on someone. one for all should be like a swiss army knife and clay. one for all molds itself to fit you but ultimately retains its base nature. as a stockpiling quirk it simply looks at the energy you have and gives you intrest on whatever remains passive or inert. the reason why allmight is so powerful is that he has reached the point of being self-sustaining. no matter how hard allmight tries he cannot use more power than the tipping point. for him its just physically imposible. this leads to the different tools that one for all gives you for their are many ways that physical energy can be used. the reason why the quirck must be the same for allmight and deku is that no amount of physical ability will allow for fortification against the equal and oposite reaction force of izukus punches. yagi and izuku were both quirkless and given the strength of one for all they were essentially equall in ability to wield ofa.
given the dissonant views i have of one for all i should say that allmight isnt a bad teacher ofa is a bad quirk.
the addict returns chapter 1 . 8/6/2018
although otherwise im enjoying the story.
the addict returns chapter 3 . 8/6/2018
in the future when writing anymore mha fics dont add any characters to izukus family. the father being out of the picture is important, but giving izuku sisters ruins the single mother struggling to raise a child theme. while the older sisters dont fill a fathers role it does change the dynamic of the family and how we look at izukus personality. after all izuku is supposed to be a lonely awkward child. the addition of sisters makes him the youngest child and most likely to have good social skills and less parenting fuckups. also if both girls were born 6 or more years before izuku this destroys the absent father theme. how can a father be so absent when he has no need to work over seas. we see in the anime that the pussie cats have extensive training facilities and plenty of private land. this probably means that the num 6 hero could afford to support her family. not to mention the other daughter is also a pro hero in the rankings, this leads me to believe that izuku would have had no problem aspiring to be a hero after all his sisters were both well enough know heroes to deserve rankings. this sets presedent for izuku to take the path of the hero. so with the additions of the sisters you have knocked out the daddy issues the economic issues the stress of raising a child alone as the girls would help. and youve made his goal more achievable by giving him a chance incounter with allmight two years early, given izuku ties to the hero community. as well as taking away the significance of izuku becoming a hero. izuku would be the third hero in his family that gives izuku more legacy than even iida and shito especially when looking at how japanese culture affects the ambition or need to prove the worth of their existence to themselves and thier family. hint every anime character ever hints at that line of thought.
Blake Tourdner chapter 2 . 7/30/2018
I Just Realised this through the reading he has a Midget for a sister
Hektols chapter 4 . 7/1/2018
I'm pretty sure that Momo and Shoto didn't have to take a harder exam, in fact they didn't have to take the practical at all, that's the point of the recommendation letters. If they had to pass a harder exam then they should have been placed in a special class for elite students, not the same as the rest of the Hero Course.

Another fic without Mineta as the comic relief, it would have been funny to see him bothering Izuku about his sisters.

Great decission to change the battles from their canon selves, Shoto's defeat made sense, you can't overestimate yourself.

Also good point with the rest of students appreciating Izuku's quirk analysis, it's an extreme useful skill for a hero.
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