| Reviews for Outsider Chronicles: Storm at Sea |
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   Spidey-phd chapter 7 . 6/4 I'm confused. Every cape is also a demigod? All of the wards got shard powers plus demigod powers? But Jackson and Taylor only got demigod powers? |
| Spidey-phd chapter 4 . 6/4 Kid Win uses teleportation tech for his equipment. Unless you can justify a pocket-dimension waterpack, teleportable tanks of water might make a good accessory. Maybe a Portal-style gun but smaller? Coupled with some tech installed into the bay? So that with a push of a button he can import a swimming-pool size quantity of sea water. Then he could get constantly in trouble for leaving salt and dead fish wherever he gets into a fight. And I can image the damage caused by dumping several tons of water onto a burning building. |
| Alucard1992 chapter 7 . 10/25/2019 Mooooreee |
| Beeswax2 chapter 7 . 9/23/2019 I know it's been a while but could you PLEASE continue this fabulous story ? You've done such a great job with the characters and the plot that it seems to be such a shame to let it end like this ! |
| OgamiRei-kun chapter 4 . 1/21/2019 sorry, i usually like your Outsider chronicles, but this chapter really breaks my suspension of disbelief. I just...not understand why... i mean, i can more or less imagine him following the Heroes, but the fact he just gave up his identity and freedom like this is way to strange. i mean, he does not even give or think a proper reason, he just...gave away nearly everything for no reason...it is just too unbelievable |
| deathgeonous chapter 7 . 1/18/2019 Not bad, not your best, but not bad. Maybe it the crossover elements… Well anyways, thanks for writing this, and bye for now. |
| Sorre chapter 4 . 9/11/2018 You know it makes no sense that a demigod can take hits from titans without getting vaporized, but has no resistance to physical harm, right? I'm not an authority on PJO or anything, but some consistency would be nice. |
| Spartan3909 chapter 7 . 7/27/2018 Thanks for the chapters _. |
| Guest chapter 7 . 5/27/2018 Just an idea but can you please try a oustider worm story with the si as death rex or ryouga from chaosic rune |
| Guest chapter 7 . 5/26/2018 Just an idead but can please make a outsider chronicle featuring an si who is a caae 53 looking like death rex from chaosic rune or as the MC ryouga with the ability to use cards from different societies like machine or anything else. |
| Darkjaden chapter 4 . 5/25/2018 Will Percy awaken as a parahuman too? |
| IsaacTheAutobot chapter 6 . 5/22/2018 This chapter honestly made me shed a tear and then have a smile from the sweetness. Dang you for jerking my emotions! You did a good job. |
| Reishin Amara chapter 7 . 5/22/2018 Agreed bad idea XD |
| PasiveNox chapter 7 . 5/22/2018 Hmmm ohhh a lot of demigods hehehe great |
| RedBurningDragon chapter 7 . 5/21/2018 Hm prabably Friday then |
