That's rich coming from Xander, going from various insults, disowning, come and say, yeah, you might be right after all.
Persuasion skills are crap in this universe. That, or they roll are crit.

Guess the only people who truly wants peace, are either dead like Mikoto, or are just the lesser evil. There is no winner in war. Except the bastards. Or the smarts. Or the ones who lose the less. Now, is this was truly Kamui and her troops ? Hmmmmm ?

It's the funny thing in my opinion, with Hoshido, they try to show it off as the good side, but it's just about revenge for one person, not even for everyone that was arround, just one person. And it's anime brainless revenge one with that, and it's sad.

Honestly, I always thought that the people of both Hoshido and Nohr 'below royals' should be annoyed at the direct situation they are put in because of their royals. Kamui can't be the only who say 'Can't you just calm down and have some decencies ?'
I know this IS medieval, but actually no, this is a different kind of medieval, and if we try to apply real life logic in Fates, or in anything, our brains will melt. So basic logic will have to do. :/
This is ironic, because Kamui is, was, trying to be the second coming of Mikoto here, but where Mikoto was apparently followed, Kamui is forced to follow.

Thank you for answering.
Personally I think you shouldn't delete reviews because you'll end up losing something. Like reviews numbers. Trolololol. Okay jokes aside, that's a good thing even if you don't do it for the numbers, some reviewers are just... bothersome, but you might actually lose a point of view that is differrent from yours.
But then again, there are people who write but doesn't know exaclty how to speak their languages or worse, are just being a pain so...
I'm not a writer, but I know what stress is, so I can imagine just fucking annoying and stressing it is to have people not being nice to you.

So basically, we agree on that point. You do you. I do me. Good story, continue the good work. Let's continue to be nice to each others.

Seriously, there's not much 2B/A2 ? I should take a look at the Automata fanbase sometimes.

Whelp, they kind of fail at their job, try to help Kamui, instantly put her to bed. Good job Ryouma, good job Kagerou !

Don't get your panty in a twist, some people won't like what you write, that's life. Even if they are, as you said, zealous, as hell, that's life too.
... I would also kindly ask you to not compare this guest with other guest, who doesn't write each words of his posts in maj. It vexes me a tad.

Thank you for your response and I meant no real offense I just personally feel these types of stories * Corrin getting angry at her siblings for not believing her* tend to be heavily biased in favor of Corrin and forget that both Hoshido and Nohr have valid reasons to be distrustful of her and that Corrin doesn't exactly come off as the most stable individual when she starts talking about invisible soldiers and swinging her sword at from an outsider's perspective is thin air.

That said I've always felt that Yukimura's reaction was a bit much in that he believes that Corrin and Azura would be able to take down two of Hoshido's strongest warriors one of which always distrusted them and their armies by themselves.

It sad That People Would Blindly Defend Fate Chracters like Camilla And Ignore Ghast Valid Points because Their Waifu is Being Critized.

You are Asking These Questions?

You Have Fire Emblem Fates Have Shit Writing... Do not let emotions Cloud Your Judgement.

Xander is Poorly Written... He is Not Loyal. It is Blind Loyality

He is Loyal to His Fake Father.. Not His Real Father and Nation.

In my opnion you could do better.

Fire Emblem Fates is a poorly written.. Yet you are making the mistake of simply Copying the orginal story...

For Example Sword Art online and Fairy Tail is Trash.. That is Universal Truth... I have seen Some Fanfics Surpass the Orginal material..but that is Rare... But i doubt it would be hard to supass Fairy tail.

Ok I love Corrin. I have her Figma and Nendoroid on my shelf and main her in both FEW and Smash but I have to say this: Neither Nohr or Hoshido have any reason to trust Corrin considering she just turned her blade at both their armies at what I'm assuming at best is mere months ago in game time.

Keep in mind that regardless of how the fight plays out Ryoma and Xander both act like she's only taken out their army when she attacks both sides so it can be reasonably assumed that they didn't see her take out the opposing army too.

It only gets worse when she starts raving about invisible enemies that only she can see because at that point she comes off as an unhinged deluded lunatic.

So at best both Xander and Ryoma would think she's broke under the revelations about her life and the pressure of the war and started deluding herself into thinking some otherworldly force is behind it and if she stops it everything will be good again.

At worst they'd think she's lying to try to lure them into a trap for the opposite army.

Takumi says it best. How can he blindly put his faith/trust in someone who won't side with her homeland?

You also need to remember there is decades of justifiable bad blood between Nohr and Hoshido at this point so it isn't easy for either nation to look past it's hatred of the other like Corrin's demanding they do here.

Revelations for it's faults does have Corrin acknowledge that she is asking for a lot in both Hoshido and Nohr to trust her and put aside their differences to work with her.

Flora getting absolutely thrashed oof.

To be Flora is to suffer, it seems. She was forced into a tough position but she is still responsible for people dying. I think the judgement is fair.

Lemme.. know if you still want me to proofread though.

I'd say too little too late for Sakura to do that.

Or, Fates have just shitty writing. I'm a genius I know.

Like, stop trying to do as if the writing was deep or even coherent in the first place, it's just delusions.
Most of Xander's action weren't, yeah no. The King's Word is law, okay, explain to me why this rule is bended multiple time.

As an author of fanfic, you have a chance to actually make Fates a better thing, but don't go pretending the original work is good, it's bad taste, and flat out wrong.

I really love how this fanfic is going so far. I agree that the Avatar’s siblings get off too easily for turning on her, and I really enjoy how your story focuses on an angrier reaction from her. It feels more realistic, and, personally, I feel that most of them kind of deserve it.

I also enjoy how this changes the story in small ways so that it still retains the overall plot of the game while keeping it original. Instead of her immediately accepting all of her siblings with open arms, she is wary of them and isn’t afraid to show her resentment for them.

Mhm, good chapter! You're definitely improving.

Personally, I'm not a fan of Ghast Station's interpretation of Camilla. I feel he's too quick to point fingers and call names, saying she's mentally unstable and such. While she's obviously not well adjusted, I wouldn't make her out to be mentally ill at all. She's simply fiercely protective of those she loves due to the absolute hell on earth she went through during the concubine wars.

So You Agree Xander is an inconsistent character, but Still think he is Fine?.

You are right no Game Is perfect. But Game is Good, Bad or Average.

You still have to Admit Fate and Awakening Had Tetrible Writing and Plot... but succeeded hooking the casual players in with Avatar Chracter, Waifus, and Easier Modes..

Hm... I think I've read this before somewhere...
Can't place it though.