Please update! I'm begging you!

Love this

Oh. My. God! I have been waiting so long for this story to update! I thought you abandoned it and I was heartbroken, but now your back and I'm so fucking happy! Can't wait for the next update, I need it to come soon. You can't just leave me hanging, I need to see Olivia and Ezio back together! Maybe with some more, ya know, or something. I can't wait!

I am soooo glad to see this story updated, I squealed with excitement I love this story that much.

Nice to Olivia using her smarts and hope she kicks some more ass.

Also nice to see you again!

As someone who is very picky about fanfiction, I love this. You breathed life into Ezio's character in a way that brings out the best of the story, and i really love the way you acknowledge the plot and remain true to the original game, while adding your own twist. I hope you can find the time and motivation to continue updating the story!
Good luck, btw

decided to binge read this series again starting with what you have on ao3 and continuing with what you have here... still love this.

have been reading a lot of fanfic set in ac1 tho lately and the words in her mind saying "sleep, novice" echoed in malik's voice in my head... intentional?

You like messing with us dont you?
Hopefull for more.
Curious about ths four year absent.

I actually didn't know the other story was finished until I checked it in my favourites. While the roleplay at the end of the chapters and the long extended thanks tended to take up too much of the page, this was one of the better OC stories, especially since most either flocked to AO3 or the fandom itself died down. The previous story was a guilty pleasure; although I found the initial support between Olivia and Ezio hamfisted, I did like how she had her own adventures long before she met the assassins.

So, this story will involve Cesare and the rest of the Borgia family. I wonder if you'll include more of the historical Cesare Borgia or the one from the TV show, in which he is an intelligent yet stern commander who'd waver between protecting his sister from unworthy suitors to murdering them. The 'tee hee, I'm so evil' schtick was delivered by his voice actor, but in this story I am wondering if you'll incorporate him being corrupted in some way from his average Joe self to the maniacal madman. Lucrezia was more of a charmer in real life than she was in the game, and Vanozza (Rodrigo's mistress) and Giulia Farnese (another mistress) were excluded. They would make excellent additions.

I am as much in love with TLoP as I am with LDoC. I really can't wait for more. I am highly excited to read more. Ezio and Livvy's relationship is well done and a masterpiece to read.

this is so Good! Please update soon!

I loved this chapter, I've been waiting so long to continue reading your story. I can't wait for more :D

You know, I thought I'd die of suspense and curiosity the last time I read this when you only had chapter one done and Olivia washed up on the beach.

That feeling was a hundred times worse at the end of this chapter.

This story is amazing, you are amazing, and I can't wait to see what happens next.

I love love love your AC series! Olivia is an amazing character and I loved her journey in life death or a choice. Her relationship with Ezio is so well developed and I can't wait for them to meet again. I felt so bad for him when she disappeared. I really hope you update soon, I really miss this story, it's the best AC I've read!

So...I just completely blasted through your Assassin's Creed series today - and you have no idea how happy I was to see that you last updated was this year, instead of 2013 or 14 as most amazing AC fanfics are! Gosh my heart was in my throat for almost the entire time was I reading your fics, I absolutely love Olivia and her Red Hood guise, as well as Leo and your 2012 interludes! Thank you so much for writing this and continuing to write this series!

Oh, but quick question, if Ezio is now 25, wouldn't Olivia now be 23 since she lost 4 years with the Shroud?