Looking the other way instead of doing what's right? How presumptuous. Harry assumes that what he believes is right is automatically right. The humans looking the other way are either doing what they believe is right or what they were taught is right. Which would make them MORE moral than Harry because they're not thinking Harry bad for doing what he believes is right even though it's contrary to what they believe is right but *Harry is* doing so to them.

I tried to get through it but I just couldn't. Maybe the quality of the written English improves in later chapters but the first impression of these early chapters is enough to make me not care enough to check.

The story is a series of poorly worded simple, short sentences and includes the following problems:

- Author doesn't put the time in to pace the story, showing a lack of planning or patience to make sure the story works.

-Harry telling people his life story and all manner of personal details.

-The audience being deprived of a lot of necessary information to understand what is going on.

-Wasted words used to pad sentences and make it seem like the main character and by extent the author, are smarter than they are.

-A huge time skip without any set up or much explanation of note.

It's a shame, I'd really hoped to find a good HP x Gate story.

I would love to read more of this and seriously hope that you update this again soon as it really is a wonderful story.

I love this so much and would really love to read more of this so please keep this up and update it again soon.

Please update soon

this is really wonderful and I would love to read more of this please keep it up and update again soon because I would honestly really love to see just how you are going to have everything play out.

this sounds utterly amazing and I would love to read more of this, so I really hope that you decide to update it again soon.

Awesome! I love this story! you have 6 months and 4 days without update this story!
please update soon!

intresting story take in the world. amusing to somethings.

Interesting fic, hope you update again soon

Noce fic

This is such an intresting story, one I would really love to see where you are going with, and jsut what you are going to have happen next. Please keep it up and update the next time you have a chance and insperation to do so. Becuase honestly this is a wonderful story.

Well I have to say that this story is well written. So good that I read it in one go. Normally I tend to take breaks between reading, if good enough I will read non-stop. So good work. Can't wait to see the next update.

Damn so it's literally after Tyuule's been captured, poor woman x years as a sex slave. I just hope you'll have Harry help her, or if Harry knows the spell, use the Imperious on that teme and make him tell the truth to the Bunny Warriors before falling on his sword pointy end first.

I kinda hope that your story takes place before Tyuule is tricked into slavery. I've actually favorited another Harry Potter Gate crossover called: Parva Sub Ingenti by Quatermass it's a good story so far. It has a post war Harry, Hermione, and Luna Lovegood coming to the other world, in search of Padfoot after learning the Veil is more like an Archway. Hermione and Luna meet Rory, while Harry comes across a bound Tyuule, saves her, gets roaring drunk with her and winds up getting married to her by wearing the Potter Family rings.