As a businessman, I'd invest in this.
-A Businessman

Honestly... I feel a strong connection through your wonderful writing. This story had me feeling so many emotions from start to finish and all I can say is thank you. This story will go down in my personal top 10 all-time fan fiction list, I appreciate you so much for writing this.

Dude I absolutely love this story. I've read a few story's across a lot of fandoms but this one has earned a spot in my rereads and I will be doing it soon. keep up the good story's and work with your other story!

Just want to say this is the first fanfic I’ve ever read. I didn’t really know what to expect but I was unsure on how I felt about being a character in the story with another new character as my partner. But wow, it was amazing, you actually made me feel like I was in their world. The oc and Kyu are so amazing, especially Kyu! Now if I rewatch the anime, I’m gonna feel like a big piece is missing. Thank you so much for this, you did an amazing job! I look forward to reading Insurrection.

Oh and I forgot to mention this but this fanfic gave me closure for DitF because after I watched the anime it kinda ripped my heart apart? I don't even know
Anyways this fic gave me the ending I wanted so thanks!

Firstly, I'd like to thank you for taking the time to write this. Honestly, best completed fanfic I've read so far on Darling in the FranXX.
That being said, let's get on to the review!
At the beginning honestly I wasn't expecting much. It started out as pretty much the same with other Anon/ self-insert fics, and the writing was not really refined at the time.
As the story progressed into the later events though, I was pleasantly surprised at the amount of detail and work you spent into crafting each scene. It was evident that you had planned every little thing from the start, and I appreciate that level of dedication to the story. I was also happy to see that your writing progressively got better and better as I read on, with paragraphs correctly segmented, grammar correct, vocabulary interesting, and the constant unfailing use of the present tense. I know how hard it is to maintain all these at the same time, and it's amazing that you've got all of them down.
I really like the twists you've altered in the plot in your story as well. Having Y/N as Hiro's "replacement" as "Friend" for Zero Two, the little remarks Squad 13 had with each other, your take on the Ichigo X Goro relationship, and countless other things that made this story very similar to Darling in the FranXX and yet fresh to the reader's mind.
I love the way you handled Y/N and Kyu's story and relationship. You took the things from Hiro and Ichigo and applied them to two new characters which I love.
I was really sad that the story ended so quickly, as I finished this in the span of 3 days. I'd like to see more of the future on shot scenes, as I'm sure everyone does.
Simply put, I really enjoyed this story and to be fairly honest, I'd rather prefer this to the original Darling in the FranXX plot haha. The only thing that I am excited more for is your other fic, Insurrection, where you ship Ichigo X Reader! I'm a Strawberry fan, you see. Can't wait!

I really liked this chapter, nice to have a slight continuation of this story even if its minimal I wouldn't mind to read more

Hey just so you know I love the story made but I thought why not make another one that's previous to this one you can call it darling in the franxx: Next Generation it'll be about Squad 13th children and it's about their adventures and their parents guidance I like to see a story about that I hope you make it

Good job Zera, so who's kids were the cretins picking on Eo To's child? I'd guess generic other parasites.

As always a beautiful chapter and btw you should do a chapter regarding Y/N and Kyu's 2nd child's birth

Really sweet, i hope you continue doing this one shots changing the perspective from time to time. I couldnt hold the smile i had while reading this!

Can I not finish the story for you if you want it up to u

... I'dont know what to say... this was just perfect! a master piece! still dont know what to say... I'm out of words... All I have to say is... thank you! thank you for writing such an amazing story, Its just wow! amazing! beautiful! its just perfect! thank you. Is a story that I would read again, again, again and again and I would never get tired of read it, again thank you so much!

Wow this has been quite a Read, its sad to see it end coming from someone who has been reading it since the very beginning but just like it says at the end of the Series "And A New Story Begins". And to one Fanfic Author to another I wish you luck on your next story and I hope that it is good if not better then this one.

Sir ... I have to say that I enjoyed reading your story very much ...thanks for your efforts !