| Reviews for Keeping their boys in check |
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thewriternextdoo chapter 17 . 3/29/2019 But I'm sorry to hear that you won't continue it. |
thewriternextdoo chapter 17 . 3/29/2019 You're not continuing it but you're saying you still have plans for it? I'm very confused |
Coastal Records chapter 17 . 3/29/2019 I'm very sorry to hear about that, but am glad you will continue to write! |
Coastal Records chapter 16 . 1/31/2019 Loved the chapter. About Elizabeth, she is Dave and Hannah's...step/half sister? I'm looking forward to how you have them enter All Valley High, I won't be surprised if Dave takes a liking to Yasmine and tries to start an intense bromance with Miguel. The stuff with Robby and Aisha was good along with everything else. Dave will probably not have to do a thing to let Hannah stir up trouble between herself and Robby and Miguel. Speaking of which, why do I not even like her? She's my own character? So I'm assuming Elizabeth is going to work as a doctor in the same hospital as Ali, now that they've moved out of Denver. It's all believable interesting and very well written. My only problem with the story is the lack of focus. I mean its kinda what you'd call fractured storytelling. There's the Daniel/Cobra Kai plotline with the old villains, the Miguel hospital plotline and now the Mills plotline. The power ranger plotline was a bit confusing too, so I'd just strictly focus on the characters from Karate Kid and Cobra Kai as well as the new ones. It'd help the focus. Luckily though, I'm glad to see the new story will focus on the kids more. Maybe they'll be the sole focus with Dave and Hannah added in? |
Coastal Records chapter 14 . 12/1/2018 Awesome update. Glad people are still uploading for Cobra Kai. |
aidan scarletwolf chapter 12 . 9/22/2018 Nice story. kinda made me feel as if I was watching the plot for season two and beyond of the actual series. please continue. |
Amethyst Jewels chapter 12 . 9/10/2018 I can totally tell you're a Power Ranger fan! Great chapter! I was getting nervous for a while about grandma! |
Amethyst Jewels chapter 11 . 8/18/2018 OMG! I LOVE this chapter! I'm wondering if the same revelation will be in the show (I won't mention it here because reviews are public & I don't want to be a spoiler but you know what I mean! haha!). Take care of yourself! ::hug:: The flu is no joke! Everyone should take it seriously regardless of age! I hope you got Tamaflu in time! |
Coastal Records chapter 11 . 8/18/2018 Liked the decent amount of focus on Miguel. Also I uploaded Season 3 of my story along with a new one. Good story. |
Guest chapter 10 . 8/7/2018 Really enjoying this, eagerly awaiting the next chapter. |
Guest chapter 10 . 8/1/2018 Brilliant, can't wait for the next instalment. |
Invisible Observer chapter 10 . 7/13/2018 So, Susan is Moon's biological mother, yet Barbara raised her. Did Susan abandon her daughter or did Tommy take her away from a bad mother? Glad that Ali is starting to make amends to Barbara. I like that Johnny and Ali have grown up enough to be civil to each other. I love the Tommy (Oliver) and Kimberly reference even more than the Bulk & Skull one. Glad that you have him married to Kim and not Katherine. So what is the story on Jessie's mom and sister? |
Coastal Records chapter 10 . 7/13/2018 I wouldn't be surprised if Miguel heard all the angsty drama happening and stayed at home playing video games or something instead of going to the dinner party. More likely, he stayed at the hospital with his mother and his very sick grandmother. On that note, I really wish this chapter was more Diaz centric. I mean, Miguel is going through a very tough time in his life, his mother just came out of a coma, his abuela's health is in dire straits, I don't know, his situation just came across as the most interesting. Miguel at the hospital dealing with the issue of possibly losing one of the three members of his family including himself, sounds very interesting and a possibly well developed point that could be very dramatic and emotional. Just my thoughts. |
Guest chapter 9 . 6/29/2018 Such a great story with a great plot! |
Invisible Observer chapter 9 . 6/28/2018 I like how you connected the 2010 Karate Kid to the rest of the franchise in this fic. It was surprising and unexpected. I look forward to the Johnny/Ali closure. I do have a question about Barbara/Tommy/Susan - when did Barbara and Tommy get together? It had to happen after 1984 since Susan was all over Tommy when they shared scenes in the movie. Also, when would Bobby/Susan have been together? Will Barbara and Ali rekindle their friendship, or is it a thing of the past? |