Tip: Try not to use Eihnerjar of characters that you haven’t put enough study into to feel like you can write their character accurately. It only leads to backlash. Alternatively, make them silent. Thought that may also lead to backlash given that they’re not actually silent at all, since every one of them has a battle and death quote - at least in the dlc. Though some of them are copy-pasted from their original appearances (notably Narcian).

Don't really know what to review, so all I'm gonna say is that I love the story so far, and take my favourite and follow.
Also, who are you going to pair Masaru with if you're going to?