Great chapter, we need to know what happens next.

don't you mean "wouldn't" take this many people?

Time to hit some dungeons

A good first chapter, but you could use some work with knowing where to put commas, especially during dialogue. A lot of sentences seemed like they ran on for too long because of the lack of commas, making it slightly awkward to read.

This is one cool story.

Keep up the good work.

NOT THE CHILDREN

Adachi! You'd better not hurt Little Red on her home turf! You hear me, Adachi?! ADACHIIIIIIII!

Good chapter.

Lol nice move by adachi . Probably the most successful human villain in the series .

Lol ozpin in deep water

Pardon me if I’m rude, but this story feels more like Fate series than Persona. Just saying. Besides Yu, aren’t you and your friends are like Jaune? You’re not a train warrior but you still fight anyway, just like Jaune who choose his own path. Great chapter.

Salem making a Shadow/Grimm hybrid, things are getting pretty heated. Hope that they rescue both Jaune and Ruby, maybe they will also awaken to their Personas.

Ah, persona 4 style of awakening, good luck on your fic and great chap, also why i have the feeling that jaune or ruby will have a VERY deathly shadow that it kicks Yu ass to next week

Someone start playing 'a fool or a clown?'

I Hope to see what you come up with next. Keep up the good work.

Adachi!