Damn, felt bad for that one Neji killed. She was made into that nightmare. These fights woo get intense!

lo estropeste cuando reviviste a Kushina

actually, shouton is a kekkai touka or something meaning it's made of three elements, at least thats what I heard

A good chapter, and I look forward to seeing how things go in the next one. Glad that some of the slaver Warlords are either defeated or dead, and hopefully the same will happen with the others in the next chapter. Glad that your back and writing, and I very much hope that you don't have COVID around where you live

Seems like forever since you updated and was worth it. Loved the fight scenes and showing nejis mental strength after everything is said and done. Great fight with ogres.

eres un inutil, estropeaste la historia

Akame ga kill and Soul Caliber

I am greatly enjoying your story. You have a good sense of rhythm and pacing, taking the time to tell a good story and building the necessary background and story line, but not stalling out by overloading or dragging it out too far. I appreciate that you ARE taking the time to flesh out the tale rather than just jumping straight to the ending. I also like that you give just enough in your glimpses to wet the appetite for more info, building a sense of anticipation for what you have planned to come.

The interweaving of your central concept of Kushina's grandmother possibly being alive is also intriguing, and if she is, leaves so many openings for the tale to turn to - from her being captured by a human in some way (Pein's Rinnegan, Obito's or even the old Madara's Sharingan), to one of the other races capturing her, to her even either withdrawing from the world for some reason, or even falling from grace. There are so many directions that you could take that thread of the tale.

I do have a question, though. You obviously do not shy away from the subject of relationships, so I was wondering if you were planning on introducing one for Naruto. You obviously retained Hinata's crush on him, but also have several times hinted that others may also eventually become interested, from his interactions much earlier with Tenten and thus being closer to her, Sakura's own turnaround in her dealings with him (though she is my LEAST favorite of the Naruto girls, much like Asuka from Negima!, and Naru from Love Hina). You even have the opportunity to go the route of him getting together with the princess of the land of fire, thus cementing their play at changing the world's system together, or the daughter of Kuro, giving her a change of heart after seeing that not all humans are as despicable as she once believed, and thus Naruto's innate charm working it's magic once again (as it did so many times in canon, where, truly, he really had his pick of girls who he had charmed in some way or other). You also have the option to play it different ways, where the relationship starts in the story itself, or leave it until the end, as Kishimoto did with his relationship with Hinata, or even go the route of Naruto not building a relationship with anyone. I was just wondering if you planned on introducing that aspect into the story, as it would open many more avenues of story telling.

You know. this story got me thinking. Why the heck anyone think Sasuke is genius? I will admit he is smart. Very smart. But he is no genius. It's just my opinion so don't worry that I hate your story. I love it. This story is good. This story is What I want. Love it

At first, Naruto having crystal release looked quite promising and then came straight up bullshit. The story is literally POLLUTED with OCs, there's just too many, on top of that most of them are skin-deep in terms of character development, not to mention having little to none connection to Naruto universe last but not least - overpowered. They walk all over the villains who are supposed to be tough and to be taken down by MC to contribute to the development of said MC and the story in general.
I know at least one author, whose OCs are incredibly well written and balanced(Atheistbasementdragon), fandom is different but that's not the point.
Then comes the matter of bringing up the same PTSD crap in half the chapters, it gets old very quickly.
Too many innuendoes, bad ones. Get yourself a mate if you're so horny.
And finally “Uzumaki - descendants of dragons”. That's bestiality dude, that's fucked up.
There had been no Uzumaki before Ashura Otsutsuki. Period.
Your complete disregard for the fandom is insulting.
Idea was great, implementation is bland and talentless.

Haaa...I guess the story isn't too bad, the biggest problem I have with it is that it makes Naruto cannon utterly worthless and...well, you seem to belittle it like nothign else. There is writing an AU and then there is shitting all over the original world.

But I guess more thann anything I'm annoyed at the many characters that simply don't belong in a Naruto setting and are straight ripp offs from other franchises. you put so much work into this story, so why didn*t you go the extra mile and created some REAL OC'S? OC's that actually have a connection to the Naru verse? And not characters from Fate and Fire Emblem...if you want to use characters of other franchises then at least have the decency to make it a crossover so people know what they get into.

And lastly who is going to be a match for your OC's? They seem to go around the place and make a mocery out of villains as if it's no one's buisness...that all put togheter just makes this a stale and boring read.

I thought it was supposed to be about Naruto having a bloodline-limit, and not a complete AU. Kinda dissapointed here...

Most writer's are assholes. Heh.

A good chapter, and I'm VERY MUCH looking forward to seeing the fights in the next chapter (and I hope that you update soon). Glad to have you back, and I hope that you are doing well

Next chapter is going to be good!

Well damn, blindsided to hell and he STILL stopped both attacks cold. That’s not good.