whyyyyy, I hatteee youuu

I love the emotion I felt from reading this! well done!

As someone who recently wrote a fic with a sad ending I gotta say I understand the pain of my readers now, and also, it seems writing sad endings is a lot easier than reading them...

I don't know how I missed the tragedy tag, ouch.

I wish i had not read the end. I was so happy with her memory returning. He will see her soon though. One bad decision during mission. I hate him losing anymore people. He deserves her.

wow really wasn't ready for the angst as beautifully written as it was.. Personally I was wanting to read to make my night better.. so as engrained that ending will be in my mind I will take the good ending..

Well, you made me cry like a baby! It was so sad, but beautiful in it's own way. Life it's not fair and sometimes the worts happen. I really love the way you wrote about It. Untill the next, takr It easy.

oh god

good writing

well done, this really hit my lil fairytail heart

You are BRAVE my friend. Very brave. Kudos to you! I am not a fan of tragic endings, so yeah since you gave the option, the previous chapter is the final one for me (also because Mashima would never kill Juvia or Gray either). But wow, what a ride! It was beautifully done, and Gray really learned a valuable lesson in the hardest way possible. I love your writing, so if you write another story in the canon setting with a happy ending, I'll totally check it out. Good luck in the future!

no need to apologize

damn i love me some angst but woooooo i need a break after this one. all angsted out. no complaints just i finally got my fill now to let it sit.

I’m gonna pretend like this last chapter didn’t happen, and they live happily ever after!

I have a feeling the “present time” links to the last chapter. ;) Good for Gray he got his Juvia back. The one he fell in love with and the one that loves him and remembers why she does. Bonus if she still has the “other Juvia’s” memories too. It would kinda stink if she can’t remember making love to him. Awesome update and I’ll be awaiting the final installment! I’m sure Gray learned his lesson.

YESSSSSSSSSSSSSS

this is - a start (!) of - a great happy ending !

so glad i followed ya

Crying! Thank goodness! T_T so does that mean she has ALL her memories, including the ones where Juvia didn’t remember Gray (when they had sex)? I hope she remembers that too XD she called him Gray-sama! And he finally broke down. Let it out Gray! I’m so sad this is ending but you did a great job. Epilogue years later maybe we can see?

Yesssss! Juvia finally remembers!

Just when I thought the drama was over... I am interested in seeing how Gray will react to this news, as well as the rest of the guild. Though it doesn't really make sense for people to fall into a coma does it? Isn't it a good thing if they start to remember? Dark magic truly is a mystery! It was really sweet of Gray to throw Juvia a party. I loved that.

There's no need to not be happy with this chapter, btw. The chapter is great! Our beloved pair couldn't help themselves in the closest it seems, after all that built up sexual tension the last few years it's all coming out now. lol Can't wait for the next chapter!