| Reviews for No More Surprises |
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George1892 chapter 5 . 1/4/2019 That was nice although I think Tony might have mentioned what happened with Peter to Pepper. |
Brrum chapter 1 . 11/6/2018 I love the way you write, it really makes me get into the moment and feel what the characters are feeling. Finished the five chapters in one sitting, that's how good the story was! Hope you'll continue writing. |
King Pepperony chapter 5 . 10/3/2018 This story was perfect! |
ravi.tati chapter 5 . 8/10/2018 This is great. Hope you post more soon. |
Tishannia chapter 5 . 6/10/2018 Really loving this! Good job so far! |
JustMe chapter 5 . 5/28/2018 Another great chapter! This is a superior writing you have done here. I cannot wait to see where will you lead them next with this story. Thank you for sharing! |
Toni chapter 5 . 5/20/2018 This chapter gave me so many Tony feels! Both Tony and Pepper missing Happy...and knowing Tony's next step is going to be one of the hardest. Thank-you. |
Peacockgirl chapter 5 . 5/21/2018 This is great! |
BellySquid chapter 5 . 5/20/2018 LOVE this story! I just read the first 5 chapters in one sitting and I can’t wait for the next! I’m enamored with your writing style! |
Shian1998 chapter 5 . 5/19/2018 Another excellent chapter! Loved how you wrote that dream sequence. Also loved how the team wanted to check up on him. Really hope Tony and Pepper will be OK. Feeling really bad for them, having lost Peter and Happy, and watching half the world die. Really loved how Tony actually finally told Pepper that he wants to stop being Iron Man and get away from the city with her. Fantastic chapter! Looking forward to the next one! And don't worry about how long it takes; we can be patient. |
Toni chapter 3 . 5/9/2018 YAYY! They're both alive and have finally reunited! I liked the way you explained all those little details, like the dirt on the floor or why Pepper wasn't wearing her engagement ring. Poor Happy and to have Pepper witness that was heartbreaking. Hope Tony's wounds heal both in this fic and in the next Avengers movie. |
Shian1998 chapter 4 . 5/11/2018 Another great chapter! Glad that Pepper succeeded in getting Tony to HQ, though she should probably practise with the suit in case she has to do something like this again. Hope Tony will be OK. Did Nebula make it there, as the first chapter said she was headed there? Wonder what's going to happen next. Great chapter! Looking forward to the next one! |
Peacockgirl chapter 3 . 5/7/2018 So glad Pepper is alive! Poor Tony! |
Guest chapter 3 . 5/7/2018 I'm glad Pepper is alive, I'm looking forward to the reunion with the other Avengers. Thanks for sharing this! |
Shian1998 chapter 3 . 5/7/2018 Absolutely fantastic 'Avengers: Infinity War' story! Really enjoying it so far! Really loved the film, even though it was devastating. Feeling very sorry for each of these characters. Glad that Pepper survived in this story, though I'm sad that Happy disappeared. Hope that both survive in canon. Great job with showing how these characters might react after that tragedy. Especially liked the part about the ashes not coming off Tony's hands. Glad that Tony and Pepper found each other this chapter, and that he and Rhodey made contact and told each other how many had survived. Hope that Tony will recover from his injuries easily enough (even though it'll take a long time, if ever, to recover from the emotional trauma), and glad that Pepper's getting him to Avengers HQ. Love this story so far! Looking forward to the next chapter! :) |