I wish there was more. I too debate about adding something to FanFiction as I’m obsessed but never given anything back. I would like to congratulate you on your first fic.

Hahaha i liked it!

Dayyuummm. Really get the megolomaniac mix of teenage tom with a crush and heartless psychopath. Brilliant job

that was amazing

This started out dark but the ending was cute! It’s dangerous, then hot and then domestic. A perfect recipe indeed. This was such a wonderful piece. Much love. x.

I really liked it. There were a few grammatical errors, but it was no big deal. The smut was realistic to me, so I loved that! You did great! Thanks for writing it

Oh wow.. I did not expect that.
This is insanely hot, in a way. I do understand why parents would object, so thank the maker I am 25 already.
I really liked your writing style here, it did not make me cringe once, but I admit to have been exclaiming it to be creepy when he had her tied up.. Uff.
But I really like the way their characters are writte, just soo good. And he is soo creepy! Everything one would expect from the Dark Lord..
All in all, I really liked it and I am sorry if your writing would ever be scrutinized by people who have no business in reading it!

I genuinely quite liked it. Not too dark for a Tomione fic, with just the right amount of affection between Tom and Hermione to make it work. Definitely a great oneshot.

Great story please update xx

Honestly, love, love, love! I definitely see this as a multi chapter story if you ever decide on doing so. Amazing :)

Interesting that he is a student.