Well since this is supposed to be a Bella,Rose story I don't think she will have a problem unless Rose is going to be a bitch to her and right the mating.
Those flashes were interesting.

I doubt you will ever finish this ,but it would be nice if you could.

Please continue please

can't wait for the next chapter in this story

Goodluck with the rewrite, I love this so much so I hope you can update 3

will this be updated?

Well I look forward to it then! Honestly I hope you change what happened with Jane. Unless that’s a key point which it appears to be currently.

Hmm wow that was quite the development. It was very sudden. Bella killing Jane I mean. It was an interesting choice to make, honestly though I’m sad cause I always like Jane.

Salut,
J'adore ta fiction, j'ai tout lu d'une traite :)
Il me tarde de connaitre la suite.
À très bientôt

Love it your doing great.

I can’t wait to read your updated work.

update please

Love the story, love your writing style! Please update soon! I did the maths, you posted chapter 1 on apr 30 and chap 10 by aug 30... So that means 10 chapters in 4 months, 2.5 chapter per month... Its the month of november, and this story shouldve had 15 chapters? Im kidding lol. Thats assuming that alls good and cool for you... Its normal to be swamped by real life stuffs, it happens...please update soon...
Ps i hope i sound desperate (esp with all those ...) and hopefully itll give you a push to update soon.
Cheers and love your story always!

Awesome story so far can't wait for the confrontation with the voltouri.

Great, I loved this new chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next. You have me on the edge of my seat.