This just got to another level! Love it, though it’s a bit annoying how testa is falling into archie’s trap - I think Archie got testa in trouble with koga on purpose so he would have to turn to team rocket. The suspense is real though. Good luck!

Nooooo, I thought this was a chapter, but oh well, good luck with the next chapter! And believe me, I love the story, the combos, and the characters.

Btw how on earth do you only have 10 follows and 5 favs, especially with 74k words!

YES, gastrodon, but there’s only one chapter left
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I think everyone cringes when they read their own writing, but rest assured, you’re doing a great job!

This story and the plot seems pathetic if you want my honest opinion.
You seem like a good writer so if you take my advice, instead of continuing this story, think of a good plot and write

That was such an amazing first chapter

I can say one thing - this is not a lazy story. It’s also very interesting,

I think your current chapters are about the right length, personally.

Really good story so far - I can see a great story in the making. Good luck with it!

So, testa’s getting a dark/poison type eventually - never would have saw that coming!

I was a bit sceptical at first, but it turned out to be fairly interesting. I will definitely be keeping tabs on this one.

Hey just found your story and it’s really interesting! With gliscor and drapion being two of my favorite Pokémon it’s no wonder I enjoy it so much. Your handling of battles and techniques is very well done and it excites me to think about how much better you’ll be by the time the Conference comes around. One thing that puts me off though is the weird thing going on with Split. Most of them time I get confused on who’s speaking when he comes around and it just makes it kinda less enjoyable. Also adding line breaks in would be a big help because sometimes it was jarring being in one place in one paragraph and then being in another so suddenly. An example of this is when Testa passed out in Virdian Forrest and then next paragraph he’s awake. Besides those two things this story is really cool and I hope you’ll keep up the good work! Good stuff man!

OK nice chapter

Thanks for the update! This was a good chapter. Testa seems to like learning all of his lessons the hard way haha. I really like the interactions you write between Testa and his Pokemon. The way skorupi cut himself to get to the anti venom was a nice scene. The scene with the man in black seemed a bit rushed. He just appears out of nowhere, doesn't even introduce himself and jumps straight into a recruitment speech. It just felt awkward. To answer your question, I usually prefer stories with longer chapters. Keep up the great work

This was a great chapter! I was happy to see you use Pokemon that I haven't seen used in any other Pokemon fanfic. Keep up the great work, I'm looking forward to more

wow such a long chapter... this story NEEDS SERENA!¡
is testa based off Paul? he is also tactical, I feel sorry for the shellos though, oh and Brock of course