What's this? An Alva and Zullie story? I love Alva and Zullie, Dark Souls is such a gritty and depressing world that finding an actually happy love story was a bit of a surprise for me, it left me a bit disappointed that we didn't get more of the two's story but at the same time the ambiguity around the relationship adds in a bit of mystery which is true for pretty much everything else in Dark Souls.

Alva and Zullie's relationship here is pretty sweet and natural with Alva unknowingly finding a new purpose in life like the Saint intended while Zullie finds genuine friendship and acceptance for the first time and has no idea how to process it.

Also wow, that ending. Nice going Zullie, might as well go hang up your own bounty posters while you're at it.

I don't know if you plan to continue this one day but I'll gladly be gobbling it up if you do.

I know you might never see this, but on the off chance that you do, would you be interested in continuing this story? You're a talented author and it is very well written.

Absolutely amazing. I love the story of alva and zullie. Please write more.

Please say you’re working on ch. 3 I can’t go on without knowing what happens next.

Guess im super late to the party but this story of alva and zullie is the best one hope there will be more chapter to this story

Although I might be late to the party I would like to say the following: I love the story you have crafted so far and enjoy how you portray both characters. I also like how you are writing a complete original story about alva and zullie, who've both only have been given a discription through items in both dark souls 2 and 3.

Although it is unlikely, I sincerely hope you'll continue writing this story. Keep up the good work and please update soon!

Oh my goodness, I love this so much! The story of Alva and Zullie deserves to be fleshed out, and your writing is superb. I understand if you've moved on to other projects, but I do hope you return to this story and finish it some day.

Damn everything was going fine until the ending. It really do be like that sometimes. Hope you continue this great story and Zullie recives the love she deservers.

Hope you keep this one going!

damn, I kinda want to see what happens next.

Finaly, a decent Alva/Zullie fic. Honestly there isn’t enough of these two. Their story is just ripe with potential. Its concrete enough to evoke emotion but vague enough to allow creative liberty. You have a good thing going here and I look forward to the future of your story. Do us Wayfarers proud.

This is one of my favorite stories, even if it's short. It'd be a shame to see something with great potential to just be abandoned and forgotten

Pretty good your story, if or if you should continue it, but of course in due time

This... this is great. This is good. I've been searching forever for a good Alva/Zullie fic, and you have provided. Fantastic writing! Can't wait to see the continuation.

Please make more I love and it's not only awesome but hilarious too all in all great stuff