The changes you've made are quite interesting. But at certain points you leave out parts to the book and keep other parts that make no sense without the missing pieces. (Ex. Jace was by Clary when she woke up and not Isabelle, so Clary has yet to meet her. But Jace says that she's meet Isabelle.)

It’s amazing, i still think there are a few spelling mistakes, and your periods and quotes have spaces between them which is sorta confusing, just constructive criticism. Thanks, the story is awesome overall.

I truly love your take on this story .its also well written .i like how you give more insight to what they are thinking . Please update soon.

THIS FANFICTION IS AMAZING! KEEP UPDATING AND DOING WHAT YOU ARE DOING! MAKE SOME ACTION HAPPEN NEXT CHAPTER!

A update!

Great update I love how cute this was!

Awesome chapter! I am enjoying this story more and more with each new chapter!

Nice update! I like the banter between Jace and Clary!

Hey! You are such a creative writer! The detail you put into it is great! I do think that it would be a bit easier to read with some paragraph breaks for the dialogue & if you possibly put more flow into the paragraphs (which will also lengthen your story & give it more depth!) Keep writing! You're great!
-Andiey

Pleas stop giving space between the commas. It's really annoying!