Wonderfully written. :) I really like Donna and was so sad to see her go! :( I think it must have been difficult for her afterwards (I mean can you really wipe someone’s memory so successfully that they forget all about some of the most amazing things they’ve done?). And I think you managed to portray that really well! Well done! ;)

Wow, I liked fjords piece. Beautiful writing, and I really got a sense of surrealism, and that whole I'm-f oooirgetting-something-but-I-can't-remember-what. There's also that childish feeling of belonging somewhere outside the current reality, like Donna is supposed to be somewhere else, not at home in Chiswick. Great job!