:))

Jelottie has reunited! Everything is complete. But let's clap for Mama Forbes, you don't mess with her kids!

Now I'm beginning to wonder which version of Elena was the best. The book version or the tv version? It's crazy like as you get older and you think back, you really begin to see how controlling Elena was and how bad a lot of her decisions were. Her plan of killing Kol and she got away with it but still got karma for it because Jeremy was the one who paid the price. I still remember how much that pissed me off back then.

But I would like to request a scene! There's this game called Gang Beasts (I'm laughing already!). I wanna see Lottie, Jeremy, Kol and maybe even Caroline all play against each other or like girl vs boys. I can already imagine it!

This chapter has to go to the badass sheriff, mama forbes doesn't play the woman when 21 shades of lethal to find her baby and i am absolutely loving it.
I appreciate how everything unfolded and kinda worried about the missing teleporter he is healed and i think his going to run to Shane next, highly doubt they can get Charlotte back but now that who she is is out there others will try...i don't trust bonnie not to tell the salvatore's and Elena and them trying something for the "greater good"
Curious about what exactly charlotte is she is both an amplifier but she can nullify magic too, she is also special or as special as the first originator of her species ...their seems to be a story yet untold
Anyway excited for future chapters

Oooh this was a drama filled one that had me on edge several points throughout Jer and Lottie are adorable, I hope that never changes with whatever else they have to go through but MVP this chapter definitely goes to badass mama Forbes. I love how she did whatever it took to find her girl, though I doubt she's going to be letting Lottie out of her sights anytime soon. With Kol, he possibly could know about the say to end the hunters curse, he's terrified of Silas so it's possible he would have done a lot of research on how he's found/ressurected... Either way I bet at the moment he's destroying that room Klaus left him in in worry over our lovely Lottie. I'm very interested to see how things are going to be when they get back home as Jer will have to deal with his sister and her boy toys again (kinda looking forward to that ). The teleporter being missing has me worried, but I'm hoping he'll be less likely to try again seeing as both the hunter and witch are dead... Sorry, rambling again x

I'm so glad that Lottie is safe now- though I can't help but feel that Eoghan will be back. Despite him being a bad guy, I find myself liking him if only for the fact that he wasn't a complete dick like Celeste. Who knows- maybe he'll show back up and leave his mysterious boss on order to go to the good side

Awesome chapter as always. Glad they found her and got to Liz in time.

i love the chapter; liz and care were amazing and the whole chapter was just so well written!

I can’t wait to read what comes next!

I love this story.
it's the best on so far!

There's not much Jeremy x OC lately. And too much OC looking like Elena or being their sister of Gilberts. I love this because it shows how Elena thinks the world revolves around her. She's manipulative in her fake innocent way.

It was bound to happen anyways, with Amara, Tatia, and Katerina.
I have a theory that when a doppleganger is born. their personalities always start out innocent before they're morphed into manipulative and cunning.
I think they always want both lovers, but can't because they love to play with their hearts.

Elena just never learns. I can't stand her.

This was such a great chapter. I just want to give Lottie and Jeremy and Liz and Caroline and Rebecca and Kol a massive hug.

Look forward to reading more.

Taylor x x

Klaus, Charlotte has had to deal with Damon, Elena, Katherine. Do not add yourself to the list.

I'm gonna guess that this was the final nail in the coffin for Elena and Jeremy's relationship huh? Is this Celeste the same one from The Originals? I really do love that Jeremy and Charlotte will do absolutely anything for each other and stay focused on that and not let themselves get distracted until they've achieved their objective. Unlike the Salvatores and Elena who constantly get distracted by each other or they all intentionally sabotage each other instead of just staying focused.

This is honestly the best Jeremy/OC story I have read, and I’m glad that you seem to be updating regularly as I have read so many stories that get abandoned mid-way.

Anyways, I love how you’re making Charlotte fit into the supernatural world without making her a vampire and I love how compatible she is with Jeremy’s vampire hunter status.

I can’t wait for her to go to New Orleans and meet Marcel and Davina, I feel like her interactions with them will be very interesting. I mean, Marcel is naturally protective of kids, but at the same time, he’s got this weird thing about killing vampires and Davina can be sweet, but she’s super temperamental and volatile.

By the way, I love how you’re straying from canon without making the characters OOC.

Anyways, love your story. Please continue updating, and don’t give up on it :)

This was an EXCELLENT chapter. Looking forward to the next one!

Great story
I really like how Jeremy and Kol are friends
I hope the Caroline, Jeremy and Kol become like a Family
I hope Klaus forget to use Lottie as a weapon
I hope that Kol find someone like Jeremy and Lottie
I don’t want a triangle between Jeremy/Lottie/Kol