| Reviews for Between the Worlds |
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   Ability King KK chapter 12 . 4/8 ...Do you even know what you want to do with this story? It's all over the place. It feels like there're pieces of the plot missing, it feels like you don't know if you want Maddie and Jack as allies or enemies, you pretty much replaced Danielle with an OC, and it's as if you're trying to set up multiple storylines all at once. So what exactly are you trying to do? |
| Dreams Come True 996 chapter 12 . 4/2 I had a feeling this circus was a trap, but I never ever expected Vlad would pay Freakshow if he helped him with his scheme. Why do Jack & Maddie still want to be with their son after all they did for him here? Will they ever realize and regret their mistakes, but then will finally start to act like true, caring & supportive parents should? You know, You haven't uploaded this fanfic's chapter for a long time and I jibda forgot what happeneb to Sam, Tuck, Dash, Val, etc. But it's good to see samily moments between Danny, Ember and Kara/Dani. |
| devilzxknight86 chapter 12 . 3/31 Lol love the update and Kara wow time bomb waiting to happen |
| Invader Johnny chapter 12 . 3/31 I doubt Vlad learned his lesson and Danny will go through with his threat should he come near his daughter again. Invader Johnny Signing Off. |
| devilzxknight86 chapter 11 . 2/20 Bruce and Selina would better Bruce is Danny Selina is Amber/ember Helena would be Danielle Golden age of comics back In the 60s The Huntress, also known as Helena Wayne Other than that love the update and hope the plan fails seeing Danny might suspect freakshow |
| Invader Johnny chapter 11 . 2/20 Vlad and Lydia have an agreement, sure hope it backfires on them. Invader Johnny Signing Off. |
| Guest chapter 10 . 12/19/2019 loved it! |
| devilzxknight86 chapter 10 . 12/19/2019 Ahhh this update made my day but serious Paul? Why not Bruce lol Catwoman Selina and Bruce Hero and villain still not to late |
| Invader Johnny chapter 10 . 12/19/2019 Danny and Ember sure have a happy family life and they deserve it. Ember also shouldn't be insecure since Danny choose to be with her. Invader Johnny Signing Off. |
| devilzxknight86 chapter 9 . 12/5/2019 Lol love it different approach but love it and gave me an idea too Happy for the update and Sam fall from grace. Hope to see another update before the holidays |
| Invader Johnny chapter 9 . 12/5/2019 Aww, such a tender moment between Ember and Danielle, Vlad's about to get the beating of a lifetime, no doubt about that. Invader Johnny Signing Off. |
| Dreams Come True 996 chapter 8 . 10/22/2019 Sam acts much worse than Vlad now, but I hope she'll get her just desserts at the end. And I also hope Jack will believe Danny, Jazz and Maddie and changs his mind about ghosts. Was that Dani in Danny's vision? I hope she's alright, wherever she is. It took You long to continue Your fanfic, but I've been eaiting patiently anyway. |
| Invader Johnny chapter 8 . 10/21/2019 Sam really caused some harm but thankfully Danny's still breathing... Sort of, now things with Jack need to be fixed and talked with, umm. Invader Johnny Signing Off. |
| devilzxknight86 chapter 8 . 10/21/2019 Awesome update happy to see this story continue a darkness core hmm i would said a shadow core or better yet a void core yea. Void core sounds better lol |
| Spidey2 chapter 7 . 10/21/2019 ️ this! Keep going! |
