I like this story a lot. Very interesting concept, I just wish there was more of it. I don't know if you will ever come back to this story or even see this review but I wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed your work.

I just found this but I like what you wrote, well done and interesting.

Good start

Love it I want to see more

update pleaase

oof, I know what you mean about reviews that are basically just hate instead of constructive criticism. a part of me has gotten immune to it while at the same time, I'm more on the sensitive side where I actually feel hurt. once I made a story...somebody gave me this long review about how shitty the story was, and as I was still a kid in high school, I ended up deleting it. I dont even have the story saved anymore, cant even remember what it was about. I just remember the hurt I felt.

but I agree. hate on a review is stupid and ridiculous. I dont understand why people feel the need to comment on a story they dont like. I'm glad that the experience I've had didnt put me off and instead I went to better my writing. (granted I have no idea if it had, I just hope it is).

anyway! back to your story, I really like it so far. I like that Tony's relationship with the Avengers arent too good so far, especially with Cap. if I recall correctly, even in the movie, they werent too close, especially since they all just met each other and Cap and Tony especially were all up in each others face. I personally loved how you made Pepper panic after learning about Tony coming from the future. it makes her more human too, making her feel as if her choices were being stripped away because of proof of her future decisions from years away. and now shes scared because she feels as if she HAS to make the same decisions. I'm curious as to how you'll have her and tony reconnect.

and I wanna see May and Tony interact admittedly. Will May be against him at first and then slowly grow into the idea of Tony being a part of Peter's life? or will she like him from the beginning thanks to Peter. and would Peter even become Spider-Man again?

as for criticism, admittedly, I have one. it's just the timing of a lot of things feels fast. it could just be me though. I'm a sucker for slow-burn stuff, whether it romance or anything else, so that's probably why your story feels a bit more fast-paced to me. other than that, I truly enjoyed this.

I hope you update soon, but dont worry if it takes long. I know the feeling of not being able to update quickly. I'll wait patiently~

More please. I really like it so far.

hey! I am an author from ao3! I love this story, it's one of my fave time travel fix its! I have honestly been dying waiting for an update, and u delivered! Hoorah! hope to hear from you soon!

Please please update

Loving this story! It’s exciting and different from other fins!

I just binge-read all of this and would love for you to continue.
A few things - are you going to explain what happened to Uncle Ben? It seems too early for him to have been killed and yet he seems to be out of the picture already. Also, is Tony going to bother telling Steve about Bucky being alive. I know that Tony would have no reason to want him rescued, besides holding a grudge he has no reason to know that his Hydra brainwashing has been fixed. But, it would be the right thing to do and might improve his relationship with Steve. He does have reason to warn Fury about SHIELD's Hydra problem, though.

Make Tony and Peter learn mystic arts because in comics there’s one universe where Tony Stark is Sorcerer Supreme

no i did not enjoy that, 3/4 of the chapter was whining. and the easiest way to defeat thanos is to gather the stones yourself and use them on him

This is a good one. Poor Peter, he's too young to have to deal with such trauma, although...does this mean he gets to tail Tony around as he tries to solve the Thanos problem? Will he get to meet the other Avengers? And of course, trust Kaecilius to complicate things.

"You're a Wizard, Stephen," Tony replied.
Would that be a Harry Potter reference?