love it! A great interpretation of what went on inside Ezra's head during that scene.

Her 'boys'! Love it! Great moment that I could totally see happening.

I’ll always be here
I can’t do this anymore! Y, Y THE KRIFF DID KANAN HAVE TO DIE!?

You really nailed these snapshots of the post-Malachor struggle. Ezra particularly stood out to me as well written, showing some of that turmoil and self-blame that was only really hinted at in the show. Great job!

Great story. More of this please.

I likes it!
I am a bit bothered by the fact that Ezra got over all his guilt so fast but then again, the show did the same thing so yeah.

So well done, and I await more of your flawless writing!

May the LORD be with you, always! ~Midnight Luna

There are a few mistakes in this chapter. Other than that, good job!

Love that you cracked open a window into Ezra's heart in those months after Malachor.

I'M ALWAYS A SLUT FOR EZRA WHUMP!

Inner Fangirl: Kill me please...

It's super good so far! I can't wait for the second part!

May the LORD be with you, always! ~Midnight Luna

This is really good!

Good job!

"...I know you probably regret ever inviting me on your ship, but I’m not useless!... I can make up for what happened!" Poor kid, he is totally afraid that they will kick him out.
And so sure that Kanan hates him, while Hera knows that he was the main thought of Kanan even when he was sick.
My heart is in pieces again...

I just love your Hera, how she tries to be there for everybody. And yet not even she can do that. People around her continue to get hurt and it is a tough realization for her.

Oh wow! The feels here... you really managed to show the agony Ezra was going through after Malachor. I’m close to tears. This is just lovely! Can’t wait to see your next work.