| Reviews for Shattered |
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Lucenasophia chapter 1 . 7/3 I really, really wanted to enjoy this story and tried to stick with it. Unfortunately, the grammar was so bad and so distracting that I couldn’t continue. It’s a good concept and had great potential, but it needs further editing. |
RhodaBush chapter 27 . 5/17 Sequel please |
Guest chapter 27 . 3/11 I really liked this story! Every time I read the title a Rolling Stones song came to mind. I really appreciated how you didn't just make their depression poof away and showed them coping together. |
Makoyi-sik chapter 12 . 11/29/2019 im kinda icked by her having slept with both harry and ron and how things unfolded to be honest... |
KayMelissa95 chapter 27 . 10/5/2019 I really enjoyed this, I’m glad they got their happy ending! |
AngelDragon1976 chapter 9 . 8/27/2019 Loving this story ️. |
Simona Polle chapter 27 . 7/4/2019 I like it, I am still a little bit wanting more or less from Harry, like the idea everyone wanted to be with her shock me a little, but I loved the beginning of her relationship. Thanks for writing |
Guest chapter 27 . 6/16/2019 Great story ! |
vickety chapter 2 . 4/12/2019 I think you are right about them having PTSD. I am glad to see that acknowledged. |
anon chapter 1 . 4/2/2019 You need a beta-reader. |
Guest chapter 19 . 3/18/2019 Don’t read this. It’s so out of character it’s horrid. |
WaterNymph125 chapter 27 . 3/12/2019 This was so good! You portrayed their realtionship really well, and it was a fantastic read! :) |
Guest chapter 27 . 3/4/2019 Amazing. Thank you for not making Severus a wimp. |
Imwaiting4myAliceandEdward chapter 27 . 3/3/2019 My favorite couple was portrayed very well in this story. There was snark, fluff, drama, and a happily ever after. I appreciate that Severus did not return to Hogwarts and therefore neither did Hermione. Thank you for sharing. |
HermioneIncarnate chapter 27 . 2/24/2019 I enjoyed your story. Great character evolution. You did a nice job at looking at post war effects without being cliched. Thanks for a fun read. |