Oh my god I read this all in one sitting and I could not stop crying this was so beautifully written and perfectly in character. I loved this so much. I want more haha I want to know what happens after! But I respect that you only want to do three chapters. Amazing work!

How very sad. But it is realistically sad, not sad just to be sad. I can understand how sherlock feels. Of course he doesn’t hate rosie. She just reminds him too much of what he’s lost. And I know the temptation of an overdose, just to be done with the misery and pain. I’ve never went down the path Sherlock has but there are plenty of prescription drugs that can achieve the same end. I’d lost my much beloved father but had enough sense and courage to stay away from that choice. It’s actualky toward the end of that time that I discovered Sherlock and joy came back into my life.

Pretty compelling start. I'm very interested to see what happens next.

WOW! I am crying. Very, very well done!

Sherlock better get well and not walk away from Rosie!

Thank you for sharing with us.

You have managed to do what very few writers have. I cried reading this. Poor little girl. Poor Sherlock. I love the scene at the cemetery with grandma and grandpa. I very much look forward to reading the rest of this. I’d love to know how she got her name for Sherlock.

...Oh my.

I absolutely LOVED this! You have an amazing writing style, and a pretty accurate grasp and portrayal of the characters. The plot- oh, the plot! It's a great idea, though John dies. Please update quickly!