| Reviews for Masquerade |
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SomeStormLeaf chapter 1 . 7/13 This was really awesome and sweet, loved it! |
I-AM-BREADoflife chapter 1 . 1/2 that was just.. bootiful |
Hkt29 chapter 1 . 6/23/2019 It was really funny to see everyone recognizing them minus themselves. Specially liked how they reacted when Nathalie revealed their identities. Agree with the truce idea and not interfering in their civilian lives, it happens in real life with nations hostile with each other, with tacit agreements to not cross certain boundaries, like using chemical or nuclear weapons. |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/4/2019 It was the best ever and soncute |
Kasienda chapter 1 . 9/30/2018 This was a lot of fun! I like how it was actually Nathalie who spilled the beans. Adrien's reactions throughout were perfect! Nice work! |
furrieswatchyou chapter 1 . 7/8/2018 Hey I know you might not want to write it but can there just be a fan fiction of Marinette convincing Gabriel to give up his miraculous over dinner and just being so chill about it? that would honestly make my year |
Concerned Guest chapter 1 . 7/6/2018 "Alya, believe me," Marinette shook her head, "I'm still trying to wrap my mind around that. I mean, me and Adrien?" And Adrien being Chat and his father Hawkmoth, "It's too incredible, I would have never thought that would be the outcome." How did Alya not freak out at Marinette’s slip up at who chat noir and Hawk Moth are? |
GracieDoll28 chapter 1 . 6/16/2018 I actually very much like the idea of a truce. That was pretty cool. And the FLUFF! XD |
GracieDoll28 chapter 1 . 6/16/2018 This makes me miss my hamsterRIP Hammy6-9-18) |
tzhrxx chapter 1 . 5/31/2018 i like the truce, and the general story is cutee |
ScriptMaster77 chapter 1 . 5/25/2018 Really enjoyed this. I'd definitely be interested in reading a sequel if you made one. |
Sealure chapter 1 . 5/7/2018 I could not stop laughing. This whole piece was brilliant, and Gabriel was my favorite. “Well, this is embarrassing.” Loved it! |
leafgreenflower chapter 1 . 5/4/2018 Hey, I like this truce. I can see them all needing some kind of way of processing what's going on for a few days at least before the balance starts tipping again. |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/28/2018 There is nothing wrong with your story in general. As another reviewer said, perhaps a beta, just someone else to find the mistakes that you will miss because it is always easier for someone else to spot them then it is for the author. It's just...Hawkdaddy is Thomas Astruc, NOT Gabriel Agreste. Hawkdaddy was in use before The Collector episode ever aired, confirming Gabriel as hawkmoth, so it wasn't confirmed that Hawkmoth was anyone's father in order for the term to be applied to him. Gabriel is not Hawkdaddy, Astruc is, because he is the 'father' of the series. Sorry, it's just the last few weeks some people have popped up using Hawkdaddy to refer to Gabriel and he just isn't who the term is for, and it needs to be set straight so there is no confusion in the fandom, at least more than there seems to be now. Like I said, it was in use for Astruc before Gabe was even confirmed as Hawkmoth. I even just typed "who is hawkdaddy" into Google and the instant results were for Thomas Astruc. I mean, maybe you are just using the term out of context for the sake of the context of the story...? But just in case, Hawkdaddy is actually Astruc. |
katieykat chapter 1 . 4/28/2018 Beautiful! |