| Reviews for All the Wrong Things |
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imaslyffindor chapter 15 . 7/22 Blaise is the best bloke there ever is. I just love his and Draco's friendship. |
InLunae chapter 24 . 7/21 I read The Right Thing To Do quickly and what was my surprise to find that you had written a sequel with Draco's POV. And I can say that if I loved The Right Thing To Do, I was completely in love with All the Wrong Things. I loved getting into Draco's mind at last and knowing everything he was thinking all along. I loved your Draco and I loved this story. Thank you for sharing it with all of us. |
R34d3r101 chapter 24 . 7/20 I loved this too. Thank-you so much for the time you put into it! Your writing is wonderfully captivating and I am sad my TRTTD/ATWT adventure is over! I look forward to reading through your other work. |
Sunset82 chapter 17 . 7/18 Meeeee! I knew it was Queenie all the tine while I was reading TRTTD and I'm very happy about it! |
Love this story chapter 8 . 7/10 AAAAAAh! I'm waiting for tomorrow to get that update for the auction and in the meantime, I'm reading through this one. I went through TRTTD at breakneck speed, staying up at night with the dark background on ffnet and lowest brightness and all the lights in my room turned off so parents would think I'm sleeping. I'm literally so so addicted to your writing. I love every single sentence of it. I love how they seem so delirious in love. Its like when they are around each other, all else is tuned out. Its just getting her to look at him or looking at each other through peripheral vision. Its so cool to see how the writing brushes over entire conversations and then fixates on the tiny movements (tongue darting out, breath hitching, etc). I love your writing so much. Please Please Please consider writing novels in life and even turning this into a novel. Maybe you'll need to have one extra novel to explain the context of characters since it won't be a HP fanfic anymore. At any rate, if you're alive by the time the IP laws on HP expire, please please please just publish this. I would love for you to take my money. I would buy this. And I only ever read PDFs. Also tiny other thing: Since you're doing the Auction as an alternative story to this, do you think you'd be interested in taking this universe forward by doing another one on draco getting captured and telling remus everything like Snape asked? It would be so interesting because Hermione wouldn't be there for a large part and she won't trust Draco at the start anyways. Also it seems like in this version the answer to the business or the mudblood would be both but it would be interesting to see how it would pan out in alternative stories. I'm so excited for this story and for you and I think this is probably my fav HP fanfic ever. I never read WIPs like Auction and the first time I started, it was months ago and I left halfway because I couldn't bear not knowing. But for you, I would break all my rules about WIPs and all. Thank you so much for this beautiful piece of work. |
Lame.brain chapter 24 . 7/8 Reading this gave me all the feels! Once again, you are amazing! Thank you! |
Ama chapter 24 . 7/6 What a ABSOLUTELY wondeful story. I am not a big fan of first person stories, but this is gold. I actually read this and TRTTD at the same time(i had read TRTTD alone a long time ago) and it was blissful. I cried at the confession... I think Draco's POV was really well written and click together with TRTTD, making me loving more your story. CONGRATULATIONS! |
Miko.RF chapter 24 . 7/5 No sé qué decir. Hace una semana empecé TRTTD y recién acabo de terminar. Dejé de lado todo los deberes de la universidad, casi no dormí pero valió la pena. Me encantó la dinámica de la historia, cómo están planteados los personajes, cómo fluye todo y todo encaja y todo es perfecto. La amé. Felicitaciones por tu excelente trabajo. P.d.: Termino de rendir los exámenes de la universidad y empiezo The Auction ️ |
Evil Twisted Pixie chapter 24 . 7/4 I love this! The whole thing has been a delight to read. I've fallen in love with Dramione all over again. Your talent as a writer has shone through the whole of this and TRTTD. I can't wait to read The Auction and the drabbles around this AU. Thank you for the time spent on this. |
cagzclarine chapter 24 . 7/4 Je ne sais plus si je l'ai déjà écrit : j'aime autant, peut-être plus ce POV de Draco que la version d'Hermione. C'est fascinant d'être dans don esprit et de comprendre ainsi ses motivations. La dynamique familiale Malfoy est elle aussi fascinante et je n'ai toujours pas réussi à comprendre les manigances de Lucius. Manifestement, il agit pour le "bonheur" de son fils mais la façon dont il s'y prend est extrêmement tordue, aboutissant presque au contraire de l'objectif souhaité. Une bien étrange façon d'agir, en s'aliénant même sa femme. Mention plus pour Blaize et son amitié. Et Pansy, que vous arrivez à nous rendre émouvante à travers son amour perdu pour Draco. Je me suis régalée à lire votre histoire. Merci ! |
Evil Twisted Pixie chapter 20 . 7/4 I am loving reading all these extra details and conversations, filling in the gaps of our knowledge of the story. Such a wonderful way to tell the tale. Thank you. |
Evil Twisted Pixie chapter 18 . 7/2 Hot, very hot from Draco's viewpoint! |
Evil Twisted Pixie chapter 17 . 7/1 I like Queenie. Well written and believable. |
Evil Twisted Pixie chapter 15 . 7/1 Blaise is a good friend. |
Evil Twisted Pixie chapter 10 . 7/1 Brilliant chapter! |