Please continue this story

Good book can't wait to read next chapter

JohanNishigami, a hypocritical grammar critic poking at someone's grammar whilst a the same time using poor grammar him/herself. You did not use a capital letter to start a few of your sentences, you typed "I'm" instead of "I am", "doesn't" instead of "does not", "can't" instead of "cannot" and "it's" instead of "it is", you you not use a space between "the" and "challenge" as well as one between "is" and "Jaune", you did not use two quotations marks AND you did not capilatise Jaune's name in your second comment, you hypocrite.

Pay attention to your own grammar instead of judging other people on theirs and embarrassing yourself, you idiot. But I do love putting people such as you in your place.

PS you also contradicted yourself.

Update please

Ugh. you make jaune so unbearably unlikable I find myself wishing he was the villain.

I get you're going with thechallenge the norm type of character" or whatever. But it completely contradicts everything you have to go through to be archmage in tamriel.

He argues ALL the time, doesn't hesitate to essentially threaten them all using ashout" and is overall far too barbaric.

I... I can't even begin to describe how poorly this is written.

firstly it's severely outdated. The world of Remnant had magic. that's how aura came to be.

only reason magic died out is because the gods killed everyone with it.

secondly, it's so rushed and so badly paced I'm wondering on the first chapter. if it's written by a twelve year old.

All you establish here isJaune is powerful and this is what's happening have fun."

I'm gonna keep going to see if it gets better or not. But I might also just drop it entirely.

too many grammatical errors and immersion breakers for me to get invested in this.

Please continue the story

Hope you can continue next chapter

Oh no Louise big trouble hope that jaune help her out this one

This is a great fanfic, keep up the great work.

Love the story keep it up

Update?

A literal clash of culture at first contact?
I can't wait to see the fireworks!

dude i have an idea. you could try making a crossover such as dragon age inquisition and your emperor of tamriel!

While this story is interesting your grammar needs a bit of work