Oh no! I hadn't realised I reached the end until I got here. Please write more, I love this story so much! I can't wait to find out who the hostage in place of Hermione is! Also, on Viktor, just some advice for his accent. I notice when he is saying 'but' or something like that, you spell it 'vut'. The V should really only replace any W sounds, like 'one' or something, not B sounds. And the V sounds usually are F sounds, like 'haff' instead of 'have'. But you're definitely doing a great job!

I hope you update this story.

Would love to know how it ends.

I’m trying to wait patiently for more story. It’s getting harder and harder! Don’t give up on this story. It’s fantastic.

I love this story .please dont give it up .it is in my list of best hp fanfics

lols. she would not tell him that ut was the first time the potion had been used. that cracked me up hahahaha go gurl!

I love this story and always enjoy getting updates. Hope your motivation returns! ️

I’m so eager for the next!

Amazing!

“If only they could make portkeys from Hogwarts to the graveyard, they could arrive seconds after Harry under disillusionment. But Dumbledore was the only one who could make portkeys inside Hogwarts.”

Well...they don’t necessarily *have* to Portkey from Hogwarts...what about from Hogsmeade? Not sure if Snape needs to make one beforehand or if he can make one right before they leave, but either way, they could leave Hogwarts very quickly to Hogsmeade. Snape could get away with not caring enough to show up to the Third Task and maybe so could Draco, but Hermione could slip away under a Notice-Me-Not charm or just say she has to go to the bathroom. Then, they could take the passageway from the One-Eyed Witch statue to the cellar of Honeydukes and apparate/Portley from there. Or they could fly brooms from a Hogwarts tower past the wards and apparate/Portkey to Little Hangleton. Or thestrals?

Oh, but I really like how Hermione pointed out to Harry that Neville faced his worst fear for him. And as for the Second Task, I have a way for Harry to get there faster with no chance of creatures attacking him on the way. So: he/Hermione could transfigured a boat or take one of the boats the First Years take across the Lake and then magically shrink it. He could keep it in his pocket, then when the Task begins, unshrink it and use the spell that Hagrid used when he first met him ion the shack...you know, the one he used his “umbrella” to make the rowboat speed away like a motorboat? Well Harry could do that to the center of the Lake and then use the Point Me spell that we know he knows because he used it in the Third Task. When the Poiny Me spell directs him, he could take the Gillyweed and dive down directly! Then when he gets his hostage, he could use his wand with that same spell Hagrid used to propel them upwards to the surface to the boat, then speed the boat back to the shore! Easy peasy.

I think it was a good one poor Winky really she needs someone more stalbe and who would treat her nice I hope Hermione can talk to her when she feels better or Dobby thinks it is alright for her to be. Hermione is teaching harry that is good for him in the end but why isn't Hermione Viktors Hostage anymore oh I wonder how that will work out then and who will it be really interesting. I hope everything will end well in your studys. *cookies for inspiration and to keeps the spirit up* _v

I wonder who Viktor's hostage is this time? Great chapter, can't wait to read more!

Overconfidence strikes again. Considering the stresses there've been on their relationship this time around, that had to be a possibility. (Does it really matter though? Was it such a pivot point?)

Well things have been changed
Let's see what happens next
Thanks for the update
I enjoyed it very much
I hope to see you soon with next chapter

Pretty please with a cherry on top update! I can’t wa, literally everyday I check just in case I somehow missed the notification.

Keep it up! Your new chapters brighten my day!