Reviews for The Right Balance
A Simple Library chapter 5 . 6/28
God... i love this fic. Thank you so much for writing this. It brought a stupid grin to my face every time I read a new chapter. I can't express the love I have for these characters, and it makes me really happy that they all got a happy ending.
A Simple Library chapter 1 . 6/28
...that was amazing...
Guest chapter 1 . 5/4
absolutely amazing i really love the story and cant wait for the M rated version
Anon chapter 5 . 1/5
Yes
Guest chapter 5 . 12/18/2019
Please do write the M rated version
jreginald60 chapter 3 . 12/1/2019
Monika's chapter is on another level. I should have know that she is Anon's favorite. alongside Yuri's chapter,Chapter 5 was amazing and funny as hell. who would have thought that Sayori would know what a aphrodisiac is,shit blew my mind when it clicked in for me and left me laughing my ass off.

Regardless. Im revisting The Right Balance becuase im currently patiently waiting for Yuri's and Monika's. take your time please. but all i ask is that please dont ever give up on this fanfic or The Right Touch. They're both two damn good
xerobois chapter 5 . 8/17/2019
niceu
The Eye chapter 5 . 8/3/2019
...I frikkin enjoyed this story. a LOT. even the girl im not a fan of got smiles out of me here. I hope you do more writing like this.
jreginald60 chapter 5 . 7/31/2019
There'ssomething powerful and heartwarming between the Player(US or Anon) and the four girls. Words alone cannot fathom such a masterpiece while reading it. this fanfic alongside your other DDLC fanfic that's currently being updated as we speak is instantly earned a place in my heart forever. I also would like to hqve my regards to the author who made this fanfic. who knows,maybe he or she can hopefully make a one whole fanfic about the sex scene with Anon and the four girls because im eager to read what sexyness you can cook up for that one,eather way I look forward to it but understand if you dont. Please talk your time if you can,dont rush with these things and please always let us know if something is going on because it will literally hurt me if this fanfic never got updated let alone finished becuase the Author either discontinued it without at least rying to finish it or died. regardless, Thank you for making this and putting my heartnand soul at peace. I cant wait for the next part where Anon has sex with Yuri and hopefully Monika. good god Im literally drooling thinking about how crazy she'll be in bed. Thanks as always,and until we meet again my friend,farwell.
odstd56 chapter 5 . 6/18/2019
Well that ended on a funny note.
Stryker. AJ chapter 2 . 4/15/2019
Anon's definitely dressed to press, that's for sure
Stryker. AJ chapter 1 . 4/7/2019
This is it, man. This is the good stuff
StevieBond chapter 5 . 3/18/2019
The movie quotes from Sayori had me grinning all the way through, absolutely enjoyed this story. Also happy that this was a harem story without all the bad stuff that I normally see in other stories. Amazing work. :D
Flare-Potato chapter 5 . 3/11/2019
Holy crap! What a good series! Also.. I’d.. Uh, love to see an uncut, undated version.. please? This was an amazing series!
True Hyper Sonic chapter 5 . 2/19/2019
I'll be honest: many men would kill to be in Anon's shoes during this chapter! Metaphorically speaking, of course. He is one extremely lucky SOB to have all 4 of them, and be at the center of that much genuine love. Of course, the raging libidos help, but the fact that he survived what was certainly an overdose of aphrodisiac says he's sturdy enough to handle 4 girls jumping his bones.
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