RAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

SO AMAZING!

This is what I felt when I first watched Grimgar, goddamn, its like an old friend you meet and catch up with, it was the perfect mix of nostalgic visuals, gripping suspense, chest tightenin S! Holy shit it was an experience, a surreal experience you achieved with this type of story (I wont call it a fanfic, because GODDAMN you made the characters your own, and I LOVE it), I dont know what youre planning on doing with Yume and the others but I understand its a slow burn right? but with Naruto and Mary/Merry? its moderately building up since theyre somewhat kindered souls, so thats fine and dandy, I only have two major questions; I'm waiting for the fluff (this is a requirement for any hurt/angst Narutoco. story, where they Heal with FLUFF! thats a whole lot of abuse if there isn't!) and will you write lemons/limes? I dont really expect everyone to write lemons but just from the feel of the story it would fit in perfectly or just write kinda lemonish limes? but other that those, This story is amazingggggggggggggggggggg! Kudos~! writer-san

Fucking awesome

I correct myself a bit, no Naruto is more emo, different from the original, what makes me wonder why Hinata would be interested in this Naruto in the first place? I know why Hinata is interested in Naruto, but this is not the same so far and only in appearance, but in personality and ideals it is not the same. I don't know why I should be interested in her and give my life for her. Also, why do you remember Hinata's death? It has something to do with history, is that I do not know Anime

I like the naruto personality that you made. honestly I'm tired of reading stories with naruto who works too well.

I watched chapter 1 twice, but I don't understand how it ended in another world, but I still think I like the story. Now what I don't like is that I saw the mention of hinata in the story. I don't like hinata when it comes to fanfiction. I thought I would leave him especially because Naruto seems to be lovingly interested in her. but I let it go and I stayed, Another thing that I liked but not so much was that Naruto seems more serious than Naruto. but anyway I think it is good, it is not completely different from the original. I'm just asking why you chose that Naruto and not the original.

ahhh I really do love this story. Really do hope you update or upload what happens cause I really want to know how it turns out. Overall this really an amazing story that I hope you do continue updating no matter how long it takes, because I have to say that I keep reading this story. Really love the relationship between Naruto and Merry even though it was rocky, but I love the development of the story that you have for there characters and how you are building them up. Another reason I hope you continue updating this story is cause I want to see how Naruto will deal with Dark Hinata that's in his mind. So yea again love this story and hope you continue updating it.

This fanfiction is really good, I'm honestly shocked at how little the favorites for this is maybe not many people watched or read grimgar. But well done I hope to see another chapter in the future.

Nice chapter!

hope to see an update when u can

amazing chapter. I never thought that i would like this story.

Nice chapter. Honestly quite exciting to see how Naruto talks to other people.

Nice nice. I was a little worried about how u could develop the relationship, but it isnt forced imo.

Goog Chapter

Damn really good first chapter.

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I wasn’t expecting much but this story is really good. Thank you for writing it and I look forward to a new chapter.

plrase uodate