This chapter led the story to a totally unexpected place! At least, to me! When I started reading this fanfic, I couldn't have imagined that you would step into the Hawk Moth identity reveal. I was surprised and, at first, I little disapointed. At first sight, the way you described the revelation and confrontation appeared to me a little bit anticlimactic. No battle, no strongly arguing, not even a single drop of blood or tear. However, reading it for the second time (because, yes, I've read this chapter twice!), I could understand that this was for the best. I could imagine the pitty and disgusting eyes Rena Rouge, Carapace and Queen B had gave to Gabriel Agreste before turned their back to him, lefting him alone in all his misery. Well, it was classy and more subtle about the pain involved than a Darth Vader/Luke Skywalker revelation.
But what I really, really liked was that the others miraculous holders finally completly stepped into the spotlight. And was thriling and lovely all together! You was able to show the loyalty and sense of duty that they shared. Most of all, the friendship attachment, even when they didn't know their real identities. And you added the final ribbon in the last lines!
When I beginned to read this story, I thought that was a romance/smut plot. I'm beyond glad to find out that it has many layers and that you amazingly made us discover it.

I knew it! I knew that you would bring that poem to the story sooner or later! And it was awesome! I just love, love, love it! Really!
And you put all the miraculous holder into the action scene! I'm just incoherent righ now!
You're brilliant!

My, oh my! You doesn't let your readers take a breath! And I like Lila so much! :(
Well, thank god you didn't add a bullying plot in these final chapters, because I really enjoy novels, movies, fanfics, whereaver, that shows how much kind teenagers could be, and not a bunch of agressive/ depressive human beings. Plus, I think that would add desnecessary drama to the story (I've enjoyed the brief fluffy).
Are we going to have the others miraculous holders in the next chapter? I hope so!
Great, great job!

Just a lovely resolution for all the 'you don't love me' drama, but I really miss the lecture from Tikki and a more close narrative about the conversation/questioning between Chat and Marinette's parents. By the way, Sabine reaction was by far the best part. Curious to know what are going to be the next problems to our love birds to solve out.

From heaven to hell! And in less than 24 hours! You were cruel with the poor kids!
My impression is that Marinette and Chat Noir (actually, you behind the black veil) had built a whole world where they were the only two habitants. A world full of flaws and problems, indeed, but these were only because of them two, their insecurities, low-selfsteem and foolishness. When they had finally created their perfect balance, BANG!, reality came in and broke the bubble. The tic-tac of their identities reveal, I could bet, starts now.
Plus, Marinette has the best friends ever!
Congrats for this chapter!

Owwwwwwwn! (That's all I manage to say by now.)
Plus, the trio Alya-Nino-Marinette is such the most adorable thing! Alya and Marinette are best friends, but Nino is always there as a support for Mari, in a perfect balance between understand and careness. I'm very keen on the way you've portraited their friendship.
Again, nice job!

This little hell that you created to our heroes! What I like the most about it is that there isn't a big plan created by super villains to take them apart, neither a third wheel fighting for their love. It's just the ultimate consequence of their insecurities, low self-steem and confusion caused by their double lifes they've been forced into. Plus, their clumsy, for sure! It laughable the mess that they constantly make with each other and with themselves because they can think straight for just one second. And they even know about their secret identities.
Have I said that I'm in love with this story?! Because, yes, I am!

I'm just loving all the tears, half words, pain faces and misunderstandings that you created. Am I a masochist? Not at all! I'm just foreseeing the happy and hot reunion of these two dumb kids.
Also, Plagg and Tikki bathroom scene was priceless and made me wish more acid dialogues with these two. And, yes, I have to agree with the little black kwami, that Marinette was really selfish and reckless as she never had been in her life. So, love makes you really stupid.
Great job!

This wasn't one of yours best works?! WelI, I doubt it! This piece is one of most heartbroken break up that I've ever read in a fanfic!
Marinette is a completly mess! This poor girl have gained many selfsteem issues within her miraculous. The twists on her two personalities makes her looks like a broken doll and this episode reveals a very fragile person. Well, I wonder if we will have a Adrien POV to see his dark material.
All those wondering is because of your very skilled writing, that make us, readers, to hold hands with the characters and jump into the cliff alongisde them.
Amazing job you've done hear so far.

You've portraited so perfectly a heartbroken Marinette that I almost forget that she is indeed Ladybug! I could say that you'd sent me right to the core of the character confusion. And this is the ultimate prove that your narrative is very, very good! Congrats!

It's been a while since I've read chapter 11, and, oh my, I've missed this story! And these two adorable and messy lovers! You've written their relationship so naturaly, warm, easy going through all of thia fanfic but specially in this chapter. What makes me wonder about the hell they will go through when they discovered about their other identities. Oh, I will love all the drama!
Great job!

noooo pls tell me its not the end ! pls pls pls add on !

Wow! Just great the whole story. I just couldn't stop my self from reading it when I had the chance. and just to let you know I am not the reading kind. So this is high praise for me.

Who could guess that Adrien would be the first to give in, huh?!
And Gabriel Agreste finally made his appearance. I just wonder if he and his HawkMoth form will be the turning point on your story, the element that will put Chat and Marinette apart (just to put them together in the end). This guy is just a huge potential for no end drama. It would be very interesting to see him breaking the balance between the main characters. Plus, I bet that the poem about the highwayman will be more than just a school paper, maybe a narrative mechanism to show something to our adorable love birds. We'll see!
Great job!

It was so funny to read Marinette being jealous of herself! However, she can keep through away her insecurities when concerns to her sexual desires, even when she's so uncertain about many other things. I love the way you construct it.
By the way, thank you for the reconciliation. It was fire! I'm looking forward to the next fight! ;)