I love the Chaotic energy, evan and Connor are both surprised how well this is going but Evan may just induce a panic attack and vibrate out of our dimension.

Lost me on a bit of Connor and Alanna's part but i do lije Evan and Zoe expressing their thoughts together.

This is GREAT.

Really great story so far! And the "time-travel" thing is also so interesting! Hope for more!:D

Wow, this is really good! I noticed you haven't updated in a while, though. Hope everything is okay and you can get back to writing this amazing story!

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhh... I’m legitimately crying..

This story is really interesting! I wonder what Evan will do next to rewrite his senior year.

This is...AMAZING AAAAAAA
The story, characters, your writing and one of the good fics I've read all year!
Please continue!

I love this keep writing it!

Yay! A update from my favorite DEH fanfic! Can’t wait to see what happens at the zoo. :)

Interesting can’t wait for the next chapter

Just recently found this story, so this is my first update. Yay! This story is excellent—I think you capture the characters very well, and despite the cliched premise (which is especially hard to pull off in the realistic world setting of DEH), it works really well! Also, I would love to see any “bonus” chapters you’ve come up with.

Even though you haven’t updated in awhile, I still hope you finish it out. :)

Loving this story! I hope you continue it!

I love this story! and the awkwardness is so funny! keep up what ur doing