| Reviews for China's New Warrior |
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  Guest chapter 8 . 7/30 When will William meet Po? |
| Guest chapter 12 . 6/26 Hope you update soon |
| Guest chapter 2 . 4/19 Tbh I have no idea why nobody is giving you acc constructive reviews. Firstly like I mentioned before his name has to change... it utterly destroys the flow and read of the story when you see something so out of place. Secondly is the grammar and overall writing. It's very to the point, this leads to a very boring read. Needs more describing to it, such as the towns he is in, characters he talks to, just the general settings. You need to add more adjectives etc Leading to an overall better flow of the story, making the read 100x better. I think you have the idea but it needs a lot more to it. A lot more editing. Id say, before writing more go back and sort all these chaps out. This will lead to A LOT more readers |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/19 Dunno if im the only one but you HAVE to change his name... frankly its just to out of place and breaks the flow of the story. If it was different but sounded the same it would be fine however, William is a too British sounding name. Literally anything else would have been better. Im in the mind of he should take the white tigers name. |
 Mite3 chapter 12 . 4/11 ahhh this fanfic is fuckin awesome, william is such a great character and just everything about this is utterly astoundingly AMAZING, but uh hope you keep writing man its awesome, so oeace for now. |
| d8rkforcen1ght7 chapter 11 . 1/23 Jinn, Ying. Those two are team roc-katt. Yes I did just say that. |
| d8rkforcen1ght7 chapter 3 . 1/23 I'm hoping he gets paired up with tsundre-kitty. |
| d8rkforcen1ght7 chapter 2 . 1/23 So Will has that in common with Stark, "I have a plan... attack." |
| Viper001 chapter 12 . 1/18 Will your oc still become a tiger? |
| Th3F4lcon-Bl4ckBlu3 chapter 1 . 1/18 Long before, I said that I was going to read this Fic. And now that I've read the first chapter, I can say it has a great start. Now I know what you meant with the hand problem xD Good chapter. I'll try to read the rest later. |
| Christian98 chapter 12 . 1/18 YES! Welcome back man. I have been waiting for you to come back and continue this fic its easily in my top 10 out of the hundreds of fics I've read. |
| AVB123 chapter 8 . 8/7/2019 I really like this chapter and good work! |
| AVB123 chapter 11 . 8/7/2019 I enjoyed this a lot and keep up the good work! |
| AVB123 chapter 1 . 8/7/2019 This is turning out really interesting to me right now and I'm enjoying it! |
| Ke-Pa chapter 11 . 7/12/2019 Please do an update CQ |
