Hi! Just finished reading this over the course of a couple days. I really liked it! It didn't feel drawn out like some fics over 200k and each chapter was new and exciting to read. I liked the developing relationships between Peter and Tony, Peter and Loki, Peter and Pepper, and basically everybody else and Peter. However, I kind of just a teensy-eansy little bit wanted to see more of MJ just a little because she had her own kind of thing going on but still in the realm of family issues. Anyway, besides that, this was a really fun read. Cannot believe how much pizza and take-out these characters ate, but also, there was this one chapter (can't remember which) where he described getting a flu-test done by having something stuck up his nose and omg that was too soon for me lol and they were just going all over the place without a care which is what I really miss. Seriously, though, I loved reading this. Thank you for sharing it and thanks for making staying inside a little bit easier for me. Have a nice day!

Amazing story, hit me right in the feels!

why does this make me emotional ? I’m not supposed to have feelings !

Come on, at this point you’re just dragging his torment out.

I have devoured this story, to the detriment of my family, and I just wanted to say how much I enjoyed it. It had lots of emotion and twists and turns. Well done author!

I read this story a while back before I even had a Fanfiction account. I honestly think it was the first story I read on this site and the reason why I fell in love with FanFic. This story is so incredible! I love your writing style, and the characters feel so real and realistic. When they're sad I'm sad, when they're happy I'm happy. It's not often I become emotionally invested in a story but I gotta say this one really had me wrapped in it. I didn't put my computer down until it was done which pretty much meant I was sitting at a desk for three days straight. I really really enjoyed it! I love to see the way Peter and Tony slowly go from a more neutral relationship to father and son. I like how it took him a bit to get used to Pepper, since she reminded him so much of May and how she was now gone. I loved how you added Loki! The second I saw him on screen he became my favorite character (besides Clint) and I loved the way Peter was fascinated by his use of magic. You got Loki's personality down perfectly too (Just like every other character in this) This story was just amazing! It's great to see how Peter grows and learns to trust the other avengers and ah! I just love this story so much! Fantastic job! :)

Love. Just so much !ove. Words can't describe how much I love this. I love how Peter goes through everything so realistically, and how his and Tonys relationship grows, and the writing, and really just everything about it.

I have spent the better part of the last 3 days reading this and holy hell in a hand basket it has given me all the feels. Like holy crap it was amazing and I love it.

Hi,
I really enjoyed reading this fic is by far the best one I've in English. I started reading the fic in Wattpad (the traduction in Spanish). You have a wonderful writing, it's very catching.

That was the best fanfic I have ever read thank you so much :)

I have to say I love the idea of Tony being a mentor. But Tony isn't exactly the most ... How would one say, sympathetic type? So although I do love the idea of a guardian in Tony, I had my qualms about a how you would portray him believably.
but you've done a great job! You made Tony seem caring, without jumping head over heels for him. You made him interested in him, without obsessing. You made him like the kid, without him losing that classic Tony snobbishness, and I love that. I also love how he was like happy is getting worried about youthat seems very Tony to blame his working on someone else.
also Peter seems to be very in character as well, which I'm very excited about, because I think writing his child like curiosity would be very difficult.
and so, after this long review, I eagerly turn the next chapter!

Good Peter is awake.
I love that he does not know that Tony is his guardian. Won't he be surprised...

This is such a good, satisfying story. I have now idea how I haven't found it sooner tbh. Great job!

I binged this entire story over three days, and without a doubt, it is my favorite story with Tony and Peter! Your writing is incredible and so beautifully crafted! I loved every part! Peter and Loki’s relationship was my favorite, and the way you wrote Peter’s relationship with Tony felt really true to his character the entire time. This last chapter had me grinning like a dork at 2am, especially when I read about Morgan and Peter. Thank you for writing such an amazing and touching story! If there is ever a sequel in the future, I’ll be one of the first ones there, but all great stories have to come to an end at some point :) (still in a sad denial about endgame, haha).

I love Peters relationship with Loki. I feel like you did a really good job of portraying the character in a consistent manner while also making him be super adorably protective of peter.