Oh man this was some sexy good fun!

You're... Huh... Well, I'll tell you that "Call Me Writefag" didn't do the best job of editing. It's like... You're a more intelligent text prediction AI. By that I mean, you're sentence structure, flow, and characterization is pretty good. It's just that there are constant punctuation errors, and quite a lot of continuity errors as well. Things happen that weren't properly set up. Occasionally things happened twice, and the characters react differently. You establish things for the audience, and then later contradict yourself.

Am I the only who thinks this type of rule 4 and lemon is extremely fucked up?!

Gumball: Alabama Edition

I love this story. I don't know if you will add another chapter, but I'd love for them to have a chapter or sequel where they are in a loving cuddle alone at home, sharing kisses and just enjoying each other

I love your story it was great. Keep up the great work. Next Gumball story I want a Gumball and Anais pairing.

I liked it, I wish there was more banter between them at the beginning, and they didn't need to go to gumball's room, and I loved the ending.

Great job

Please, you give me too much credit. I'm just happy to help. Especially when it's a Gumball/Nicole fic, and *especially* when it's such a *good* Gumball/Nicole fic.