AHHHH PETER AND CHARLOTTE 2/3 OF MY FAVOURITE SOUTHERNERS

Not gonna lie, I was incredibly heartbroken reading the scene of her identity reveal.

Claire is as innocent as Sarah, if more so. I think seph or Persephone was perfect, but it did hold her to her darker past as a newborn. Hmmm. Isn’t Claire one of imprints? Or was it a different c name?

yeaahhh reading Alice get another girl all dressed up for jasper is not doing it for me. I'm going to bow out here. Thanks!

I dont see it... why change the Alice and Jasper coupling just to add a Marcel type vamp for Persephone? why couldn't alice and jasper be together and marcel. be with Persephone? seems unnecessary to do anything else.

I thought twenty-two was great and this one is even better. It doesn't matter how long the wait is, this story is worth it!

Bella is a trouble maker

Sheltered vampires. Now that's a first!

Oh, very interesting! I was wondering how exactly you would tie the Cullens to her. Now I have my answer. Fascinating. Are the two passing by vampires Peter and Charlotte?

Nice chap

Our nameless protagonist is very interesting. I loved the glimpse you provided into her past (or lack thereof). Your writing flows really well, and I really enjoyed the quick transition into the world of the Cullens. Though, it might be nice to make it more clear with a heading. My first thought with the line "It wasn't often that the estate fell quiet..." was the estate that the coven was staying in, not the Cullens. Can't wait to read more.

Your imagery is astounding. I especially enjoyed the interaction you described with the man by the club.

Where do I begin? First off, don't apologize for the absence! I understand how hard it can be juggling academics, work, and creative works. Your success in school and work should totally come first! This update was well worth the wait!

I loved the way you handled portraying grief by going through each stage, it was a wonderful way of illustrating the struggles and frustrations that Persephone faced during that time. She was an outsider looking in, she still has a lot to learn about vulnerability and the emotions of people around her, and you wrote that perspective perfectly in my opinion. (I wanted to cry when she worked so hard to make that floral arrangement... IT WAS SO THOUGHTFUL and it shows just how far she has come since the beginning. She cares! She really, really cares even though she still struggles with showing it. Her character development is solid.

The training scene was great, very detailed and easy to understand. Too often some authors get a little word happy with battle scenes... and I end up skipping them because a lot of the wording goes over my head but this wasn't one of those situations. Persephone was very analytical and her motivations are in a good place, again- she's grown so much. She wants them to succeed and survive.

That ending though! I won't spoil it in case people come to the reviews first for some reason but !
You never fail to shock me with these crazy curveballs!

I am VERY excited to see what happens next and the shitshow that will most likely follow!

Good. Bella sucks

I'm happy to see you back! I'm sure I'm not the only one that understands how stressful school can be, especially around finals. Don't worry about needing extra time! We all need it sometimes! And your writing is amazing! I've always liked how easy it is to follow. It never seems rushed or choppy to me :) Can't wait for the next update!