Is the story in this chapter of your own writing or is it from another story bcoz just from the excerpts it sounds beautiful

this is a very unusual story. And I'm terribly glad I found her . Naruto is very well worked out (which I personally rarely saw), the variability of realities is also good ? (an interesting situation turned out интерес)))). MANY THANKS FOR THE JOB DONE . WITH TERRIBLE IMPORTANCE I WAIT TO CONTINUE . AND PLEASE, YOU, PLEASE COMPLETE THIS STORY TO THE END ... (and I’m glad that at least it comes out, but I would like to see the continuation sooner))) ...

Good story. It brought both laughter and sadness to me. The G-virus, as I named the one about 'youth!', is the funniest, and scariest, one of all! This last one almost made me cry, because I could see all that actually happening. I wish you well and hope you can overcome your depression. I have family suffering from it also.

Well I like depressed and anti social Naruto!

I think I remember reading this. It was sad.

Lovely new chapter!

I almost lost my lunch. Thanks for that.

Definitely hope there’s a story made from the last two chapters

Please, for the love of English, don't mistake "you're" for "your". Its two completely different things, and have absolutely nothing similar in meaning.

I like this darker story and hope to see a part 2 of this. Depression is a burden that when you hold it too much time you get used to it and see the world in a more somber way and less energy to move forward. I had a chinese doctor that did acupuncture, massage and blow some mix of medicine in my nose to relax all the tension in my muscle for all the depression and stress i had hold. That was a signal of how screwed up i was. Feeling physical better helps jumping out of it.

Oof, yea your telling me to many neglect fic's for my liking. Banish fic's are easier to handle since he at least has a better life outside of the village. Wonder how one would actually make that work considering Naruto is a Jinchuriki? Like this is going off how the villages actually are. Doing so would be stupid, maybe have him get abducted like in Kitsune Sanctuary or an older version of him fake's his death at the Valley of the End? I know overused, but that's the only time I can think of he can actually get away with it.

Dumb that you didn't put story names how are we supposed to go read them sad face I personally said yayyy when Sasuke got killed

- Contract
Yeah him boffing his own mother is going to melt his mind.

He'd be aghast enough at doing Karin, who's a distant cousin at best, let alone any immediate family.

- Responsibility
Going to have to disagree with Naruto here, but that version of Kakashi does bear a significant amount of responsibility for his Naruto's death.

A) A jutsu is like a "live/loaded" weapon, if you give one to someone you know is mentally disturbed, than you do share some of the blame for their actions.

As you've given them the means to escalate to a level, that they couldn't before.

B) It's not helped by his utter failure as a teacher to that Naruto, working under the premise that he was taught the same things as in Canon.

That would be Tree Walking and teamwork exercises for a clearly dysfunctional team, that was going to implode at some point anyway.

What did Kakashi do to counter the gaps in that Naruto's knowledge base (both due to sabotage and skipping, and that's not even counting that Naruto might be semi-Illiterate, as their writing style is far more complex than English. So his reading ability might be at the level of an 8 year old max, rather than the teen he is.), or his sabotaged physical skills (Mizuki was in charge of that section IIRC) ?

Did he suggest any other chakra control exercises for Naruto to gain control over his reserves?

So yeah, by not properly training Naruto, like he did do for Sasuke, even if it was only for the Chuunin Exam Finals, he did contribute to his Naruto's death.

As a more skilled Naruto might not have died or kept Sasuke tied up long enough for Kakashi to arrive as backup.

I know that Naruto is Ninja Jesus and forgives everyone for everything, but that also kinda prevents them from doing penance and bettering themselves as people as a form of restitution to those they've failed/slighted etc.

"Naruto Senju" by "TheBeardedOne" is a good example of that.

THAT Kakashi had similar regrets to this one, but he pushed by them to do what was right for Naruto and in exchange ended up with a far happier life, because of it.

And there are others with a proactive Kakashi trying to do his best to see his Sensei's son become the best Shinobi he can be.

(Another one by "TheBeardedOne" essentially has Kakashi and Guy raising a super strong Naruto and yeah, again a happen life for the both of them, even with the Elder Council screwing over Naruto to deny him his inheritance.)

To reference an old chestnut: "It's our choices that define us, rather than empty words".

Nice chapter! And I think I might've read this somewhere probably not, probably something similar. By the way the story with the Shinigami I'm actually reading that story again. Man that's going to be hilarious if u do show it. By the way are u going to do alternate worlds by any chance? Cause I have two suggestions that I wouldn't mind reading Caliburn Initiative and End Game Version R. One chapter considering they are long and I mean long chapters but very amazing quality. I miss those stories.

Basically an abridged series:B