This romance is so melodramatic. It's pretty obvious that this whole rule shit is set up for them to angst over. And frankly, I don't care for their relationship.

This is ridiculous. Gohan can't wait for a sec to get fixed up? The whole set up is ridiculous.

God, this Gohan is pathetic. Seriously? He just acts all scared in front of Vegeta?

Jesus, this Gohan is ridiculous. All he has to do is go find Vegeta. He can't even do that. Or stay for 2 seconds without coming up with a ridiculous lie, act like a weakass clown, or breakdown.

Jesus, this Gohan is pathetic. Stilling moaning and blaming himself. And acts all coo, but is nothing more than a bumbling fool before Videl? The fuck?

So he is the destroyer, but still act like a ridiculous goofball?

Exactly what has his training been doing?

I've reread this chapter (and a good portion of your story -only about ten times- again) and I am counting down the days/weeks/months to your next update. I am hungry for more of your LUSH writing. I have no idea how you put these beastly chapters together, but keep doing your magic because this story is the best thing to happen to the fandom in a very long time.

Still loving the Gohan/Piccolo chapter from bare time ago.

Hurry up, I need my fix. ;)

I need Makhai!

Update please

I love it but I really want Gohan to meet goku for real and goku recognises him

Yo your fanfics are the best like honestly this is soo sick plz carry on making these amazing story I luv them soo much

Plz make another chapter this story is soo good thnx

Hi I really like your story and I'm also gh/vi fan please continue

This chapter is great fuuuun! I really enjoyed it :D

I loved how much world admin you packed into this one. And seeing things from Yemma's perspective was really cool!

Now Janemba. omfg. You have executed him so brilliantly! love how you had him from the loo! so hilarious! And Radditz and Bardock with Gine during the whole ordeal! Bahahahaha! Just so funny! I really wish we could have had these guys instead of Pikkon in the original. They are fabulous suppourt fighters hahahahaha. I really want Goku to meet them. That would just be a total hoot!

All the Z fighters shopping. Wah! you really spoil us. I loved that scene so much. Especially the small moment between Videl and Goku! just so cute! And that commercial. just damn. I could not stop laughing! I really think that was my favourite part of thr whole chapter hehe! I really want Gohan to get back soon! I hope he does! I loved how the ladies all went to chill with a drink while everything was happening. We really need a moment like that is cannon now I think! haha!

And his fight with Janemba at the end! Wah! You make Gohan so freaking cool! The creepy whispers are the end. waaaaahhhhh. Can't wait to see what you have in store for Gohan next! All the best with your next chapter!

Can you make Goku finally recognise Goku and Gohan show he’s powers

Hey..i hope Gohan gets the idea the saiyans the destroyer elite guard like the Supreme kai did... Or train em Super Saiyans! But i love this fic. Update soon!