| Reviews for The Blessing |
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Guest chapter 20 . 7/14 I love love loved this story! I’m a sucker for any smww fics where they have cute lil babies, they’d definitely be good parents! Couldn’t get enough of this story so I went ahead and read a bunch of your other fics which were all amazing of course. I was wondering if you were still planning on writing the part 3 of this story? I’d love to see more of little Astrea, she’s the sweetest! |
Guest chapter 20 . 5/23 Beautiful story |
pesterhopper chapter 20 . 1/27 Great story. I love Astrea. Update please! |
Einstein's Mistakes chapter 20 . 11/6/2019 Ooh! Yay! Another addition to the family! I was wondering if you were going down the Frank Miller's Golden Child Route. Astrea could represent the Power of the Kryptonian Race while the new addition (really hoping that the child's name is Van, after his son from the Justice League Animated, Black Mercy episode) represents the Wisdom of Kryptonians, like Buddha on Steroids. |
ArtimuosJackson chapter 20 . 10/30/2019 Nice story love the superwonderful baby. |
Meazm chapter 20 . 10/29/2019 Awesomeeeewe! |
Francombe chapter 20 . 10/27/2019 Great chapter, excited to see where you take this. |
XZanayu chapter 20 . 10/27/2019 I just love this story! You did such a great job with the story and the characters! Keep going! |
Guest chapter 19 . 10/21/2019 If you have WW speaking Modern Greek you're wrong. Why? Several SMWW fan fiction writers have put Hippolyta's age as at least 3000 years old. That means that the Themysciran Amazons speak a tremendously ancient form of, well, Ancient Greek. Is it Mycanean Greek? Is it the earliest form of Greek that is still undeciphered (Linear A? Linear B? Sorry, I get them mixed up.)? Could it be a proto-Greek that had no written form? Who knows? I suppose that WW might learn Modern Greek out of curiosity, however in moments of the severest stress she would naturally revert to her native language. It's not unheard of to encounter immigrants that have been living in a "new" location for 60 years yet have a strong accent and sometimes a minimal command of the local language for any number of reasons. If WW had a secret ID as a Greek immigrant it'd be critical to learn modern Greek and then to soften the accent. |
Guest chapter 11 . 10/18/2019 Very strong Jackie Collins and Barbara Cartland influences heated well into the "X-plus" range. I've read other SMWW stories that were FAR more graphically descriptive of their sex acts but I've extremely few that were more allegorical in similar descriptions. |
Guest chapter 3 . 10/14/2019 This very chapter demonstrates the absolute necessity of secret identities! Some people would become bitter and nurture hatred towards the super-heroes. Non-powered colleagues and friends would feel used or worse. If at all possible brand new secret ID's would have to be invented. The heroes would need to move to distant cities, perhaps even countries. No matter what would be done chaos is inevitable. WW, SM, and possibly J'onn would outlive this situation, but the other heroes can't. The following generations of superheroes will learn from this disaster and would never reveal their ID's. There's even the possibility they might refuse to become superheroes. |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/14/2019 "Woah" has TWO syllables-"woh" and "ah." Here in the USA the majority of the people would say "WHOA," which has only ONE syllable. "Whoa" is what cowboys say to horses while pulling back on the reins to get said horse to stop moving (yes, we STILL have a few honest-to-God cowboys!). We use it as slang for "slow down" &/or "stop" in numerous situations. The Batman has a deeply ingrained but artificial paranoia and would NEVER reveal his birth name to the world. It would take a catastrophe of truly unimaginable proportions for even some, not all, League members to only CONSIDER revealing their secret identities. It would be an OVERWHELMING conflict of interest for SM to publicly continue working at the Daily Planet. "Ordinary" villains wouldn't cease to exist just because all super-villains, insane gods, and demons disappear. Sadly, your opening premise is impossible. As humans are imperfect beings we still suffer from many negative emotions, feelings, etc. |
Guest chapter 19 . 10/9/2019 I hope this isn’t the end of this story. This is so good and so emotional! Thank you so much for keeping Clark and Diana in character with all your stories! I’ve been very disappointed by DC since new52 went away. I don’t recognize Supes and Wondy I used to love and be such a big fan of. This has been a safe haven and so much more entertaining! I wish that DC would take note of how to write an interesting super-powered baby and family. LOVE Astrea! Reading her makes me smile every time. Supes and Wondy belong together. |
Francombe chapter 19 . 9/18/2019 I really hope you continue this fantastic story. I always enjoy stories with an older Clark and Diana. |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/30/2019 I know that you have your reasons but my belief is that the vast majority of the superheroes would never reveal their secret identities. Although I've never had cable tv my feeling is that in the Batman Beyond series Bruce didn't ever reveal that he was the original Batman (hey, if I'm wrong I'm willing to be VERY gently corrected). In this story my guess is that Lois is in her mid-to-late 40's and that Jimmy is about 5 years behind her. Perry should be in his 80's. |